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Look Before You Leap By Entity -- Report

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A woman has one goal in mind, get to the other side but the unexpected happens
*Contains vore and a mermaid*
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Slash

Posted by Slash 15 years ago Report

Unwilling pred and prey/ Surprise vore. Now thats rare. Great story^^

Entity

Posted by Entity 15 years ago Report

Thanks, i'm glad it came out as unexpected vore.

IGA

Posted by IGA 15 years ago Report

Great job. Mermaid vore is always good for me.

Entity

Posted by Entity 15 years ago Report

Mermaid's make the best preds XD, thanks for the comment

BardicLasher

Posted by BardicLasher 15 years ago Report

Solid story. I liked it very much.

Entity

Posted by Entity 15 years ago Report

Much appreciated :)

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 15 years ago Report

Very neat. Excellent work. Great on the detail too.

Entity

Posted by Entity 15 years ago Report

Thanks. its good for only a couple of hours work XD

Willing bystander

Posted by Willing bystander 15 years ago Report

Love unwilling pred vore :) Keep up the good work

Entity

Posted by Entity 15 years ago Report

Will do :)

Svartvinge

Posted by Svartvinge 15 years ago Report

Were intreesting story... i really like the whole deal with suprise vore as that...and even better when it comes with a mermaid ^^

Entity

Posted by Entity 15 years ago Report

Well mermaids do make the best preds XD

Svartvinge

Posted by Svartvinge 15 years ago Report

they indeed do! but its a bit sad that there ise't many of them around

Entity

Posted by Entity 15 years ago Report

Well i'm sure we can change that. You keep drawing them and i'll keepp writing about them. Your images give me ideas anyway XD

The K

Posted by The K 15 years ago Report

Love the throat bulge parts. Two large round bulges, very cool.

Entity

Posted by Entity 15 years ago Report

Well it's what would happen XD

Squidia

Posted by Squidia 14 years ago Report

Well, that was short but sweet. The whole accident angle was amusing, and generally helped this one stand out, despite its brevity.

Entity

Posted by Entity 14 years ago Report

Well thank you,i'm glad you think that way.

Bright

Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report

Always enjoyed this story.

Entity

Posted by Entity 10 years ago Report

It's one of my favs as well :)

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report

What's with the near extinction bit?

Entity

Posted by Entity 9 years ago Report

It's just a unique ending to the story i think ^^;

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report

Hmm ...Okay I guess

Entity

Posted by Entity 9 years ago Report

Not to your taste?

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report

It's just quite a gap in explanation since I couldn't find any reason for the near apocalypse scenario

Entity

Posted by Entity 9 years ago Report

Well it's meant to imply that the mermaids get a taste for humans and go on a nomming spree.

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report

Ah well then that explains it nicely, only deserts and mountainous areas were spared then.

Entity

Posted by Entity 9 years ago Report

Yep ^^

Bobrocks

Posted by Bobrocks 5 years ago Report

That or any land not next to water.