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Dealing with some old requests. This is really short and kinda sucks, but if enough people ask I'll make a sequel.

Also, please comment, even if you think it sucks, tell me WHY it sucks. If you think it's good, tell me that to, I have low self-confidence.

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IGA

Posted by IGA 14 years ago Report

i actually liked it. written well and easy to follow. and the characters were pretty funny. nice job!

Misasura

Posted by Misasura 14 years ago Report

It was good. I enjoyed the scene where Charles shot Jess. Made him seem like a trigger happy jerk who deserved digestion.

Houyo

Posted by Houyo 14 years ago Report

Was an interesting read, like the part where she compacted her stomach and crushed him. Don't see that very much.