I know this may not seem like much in the way of a useful comment, but I've been waiting to read this until my kindle arrived. Now that it has, it is the first thing I have downloaded and will begin reading. I'm excited!
Holy hell. That was a breathtaking ride from start to finish.
Though i must ask one thing, the God who's job it was to bring new people into the world, I made a silly connection of "bringing new Readers into the world of Ishara". But was it a nod to Duamutef?
Posted by sansuki 14 years ago Report
Go here if you want to see what I think went wrong during writing! Self criticism ahoy!
http://aryion.com/forum/blog/sansuki/index_b-6962.html' target='_blank'>http://aryion.com/forum/blog/sansuki/index_b-6962.html
Posted by Bitter 14 years ago Report
I am officially tagging this as A Hell of a Thing.
Posted by temporos 14 years ago Report
new Submission the_Long_Way_Home;
the_Long_Way_Home.setStatus(new Favourite(double timeDelay=0));
(In intarwebz-English: IMMEDIATE FAV!) XD
Posted by fred123 14 years ago Report
This is the best story I have ever read online.I really hope you write more.
Posted by Phant0m5 14 years ago Report
most. brilliant. story. ever.
Posted by 4ofSwords 14 years ago Report
I know this may not seem like much in the way of a useful comment, but I've been waiting to read this until my kindle arrived. Now that it has, it is the first thing I have downloaded and will begin reading. I'm excited!
Posted by temporos 13 years ago Report
I still say you need to publish this... It's too epic to be NOT published.
Posted by 2quick4u 8 years ago Report
Holy hell. That was a breathtaking ride from start to finish.
Though i must ask one thing, the God who's job it was to bring new people into the world, I made a silly connection of "bringing new Readers into the world of Ishara". But was it a nod to Duamutef?
Posted by sansuki 8 years ago Report
It 100% was. :)
Posted by theoriginalnaga 3 years ago Report
This is absolutely beautiful. <3