Not a single action occurs in this piece, but I still found it engrossing because we get to see not how the prey feel, but how the guilty party setting these things up feels. I felt her desperation to survive and yet passion at the same time for what she does/causes.
That's... Just a little disturbing.
Hm. My vindictive side says she deserves to suffer for what she does to all the other fey, but then again, is it really her, or did her Greater Fey mindrape her into being the kind of person who enjoyed it?
Hmmmmm...
I love how this is not a generic meet-sex-swallow story, the way it is written just makes you think and imagine and empathise. Its different. I really enjoyed it too. I really love the stories and emotions involved before voring, and this here is just that.
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
Not a single action occurs in this piece, but I still found it engrossing because we get to see not how the prey feel, but how the guilty party setting these things up feels. I felt her desperation to survive and yet passion at the same time for what she does/causes.
Posted by Readasaur 13 years ago Report
That's... Just a little disturbing.
Hm. My vindictive side says she deserves to suffer for what she does to all the other fey, but then again, is it really her, or did her Greater Fey mindrape her into being the kind of person who enjoyed it?
Hmmmmm...
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
That mind-rape possibility occurred to me too. It does make you think, hmmm?
Posted by tangent 13 years ago Report
I really like this set-up/scenario. Really interesting... Ill try not to steal it... Awesome. <3
Posted by Bitter 13 years ago Report
Well, you know what they say about imitation being the sincerest form of flattery...
Posted by Dragonic_Wolf 13 years ago Report
I love how this is not a generic meet-sex-swallow story, the way it is written just makes you think and imagine and empathise. Its different. I really enjoyed it too. I really love the stories and emotions involved before voring, and this here is just that.
Posted by Red_Wolfen 13 years ago Report
This is beautiful, just beautiful.
Posted by BardicLasher 13 years ago Report
This is wonderful! Bait-fey, wonder a wonderful idea... I want one.
Posted by French_snack 12 years ago Report
Great work. I'm looking for the right word to describe this; somewhere between "vivid" and "touching".
Posted by twistedfox 12 years ago Report
been reading you a while but this is a fav
Posted by Ruler101 11 years ago Report
Yeah, I'm gonna go and say it. She totally does deserve it. Then again, her and"big" and all his kind probably deserve a knife in the spine as well.