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Chrono vs. Jack of Hearts Trump Maid 2/4 By MementoMori -- Report

This is Part 2 of the rest of the pictures I drew of camel's original characters "クロノ" and "トランプメイド" (Chrono and Trump Maid, thanks for the clarification Cruich!)

Chrono realizes she might be a little in over her head as the Jack of Hearts Trump Maid reveals her maw - and for good reason, since it wasn't in order to speak to her. Her mouth had already been watering and her throat was wide open in preparation to swallow poor Chrono up. As her large tongue ever so gently lapped at her face, Chrono's bunny tail shivered in the anticipatory fear of being eaten alive, and suddenly her weaponry felt as useless as it probably was! Oh noes!

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Chrono and the Trump Maids © Camel ( http://dgallon.blog75.fc2.com/ )

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ItsJustaGoober

Posted by ItsJustaGoober 12 years ago Report

Man,that's awesome...I'm going to assume that this is related,somewhat,to "Wonderland"...yes?:D

Poor 'Chrono'...doesn't realize that it's a vain attempt...oh well,more enjoyment for us~

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Lol yeah, the characters are from the blog linked at the bottom of the description, but I get some Alice-in-Wonderland vibes from it too. I think it is supposed to be sort of like it. :)

Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you like it! :)

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ItsJustaGoober

Posted by ItsJustaGoober 12 years ago Report

Welcome,and is there a specific thing I should look for on the site?I kept going in circles.6,9;

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Oh, lol. Well I just kept clicking the クロノ tag at the right in the 'tag cloud' (I just clicked Edit >>> Find, in my browser window, then searched for "クロノ" and clicked Next until it highlighted that phrase (クロノ) in the tag cloud. Then I clicked onto that link.) Once you do that it will narrow down their posts to the ones that had pictures containing these characters.

And if you're like me in that you're not fluent in Japanese, I just used Google's translator to translate the descriptions. Basically understanding it is 10% translation, 5% common sense/context clues to make those translations make more sense, and 85% understanding the picture since art is (thankfully) a universal language. xD Hope that helps you!

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Hmm I'm not sure if this will work for you but this is the URL to the tag 'Chrono'(クロノ) xD

http://dgallon.blog75.fc2.com/?tag=%A5%AF%A5%ED%A5%CE

There you go, hope that works! But if not the method I mentioned below should work.

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ItsJustaGoober

Posted by ItsJustaGoober 12 years ago Report

Pfffft,that helped alot!

Thank you,and I CAN wait to see the rest of this~

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

You're welcome, and well thanks, good thing you didn't even have to wait for it! That's always nice huh! xD

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ItsJustaGoober

Posted by ItsJustaGoober 12 years ago Report

Pfffttt...that's true now...now,I can enjoy the masterpiece~

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Cruich

Posted by Cruich 12 years ago Report

That second set of katakana says "toranpu meido", which can be interpreted either as "trump maid" or "tramp maid". Most likely meant to be the former, if it's card-related.

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Okay thank you! I wasn't sure that's why I was putting their names in quotes like that. I'll go and update it right now. :)

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Cruich

Posted by Cruich 12 years ago Report

Glad I could help. :)

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enumatse-fluffy

Posted by enumatse-fluffy 12 years ago Report

Ahaha I was expecting the Jack to be male 8D;; But I guess it wouldn't be much of a maiden then, ahah XD

I'm gonna have to show my friend some of these, he has an Alice in Wonderland fetish or something ; v ;

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

LOL, yeah you know what at first I made her boobies too small so she looked like a trap.. and I was really not sure whether to leave it but I ended up changing it since they're not mine, hahaha. But yeah I ♥ traps as I think we've discussed x3

And oh does he? LOL!

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enumatse-fluffy

Posted by enumatse-fluffy 12 years ago Report

Ahaha yeah > U < I saw that her boobs weren't quite as large as the Ace's, so I was hopeful that maybe it was male, so I checked the tags for F/F or M/F... and I saw F/F and I was just like ". A . Damn" ahaha XD

I think it'd look really good as a trap, not that there'd be too much of a difference > U <;

Yeah ; v ;~ He obsessed over the American Mcgee games and does Alice-themed RP's and he wanted to buy merchandise for it super super bad but it'd be a really bad idea to buy a huge knife when you have siblings that are 11 years old XDD

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Hehehe, aww sorry! xD But yeah I thought the same thing too, they would have made a cute trap too. :3c

LOL I see. That's too funny, Omg that mental-image.. not pretty. xDD

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enumatse-fluffy

Posted by enumatse-fluffy 12 years ago Report

Oh wow, the way you do throat shots is amazing . A . You even make the uvula scrunch up ; U ;

I especially love how calm the maiden seems to be too > U <

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Aww thank you fluffy.. ^///^ Hehe

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redsquallff8

Posted by redsquallff8 12 years ago Report

LOVE THE MAW SHOT

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Thank you! xD

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redsquallff8

Posted by redsquallff8 12 years ago Report

nice texture on this scene

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Thanks! I appreciate that :)

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enumatse-fluffy

Posted by enumatse-fluffy 12 years ago Report

; A ; Wow, if the guy that created these characters saw this I'm pretty sure they'd be amazed--I was browsing through the link and it just. Wow. I need to get better at drawing hahaha XD

I love how curious the 3 of clubs is, ahaha > U <

... And awwww, she swallowed her weapon with her too--poor Chrono, ahaha ; U ;

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Lol aww I like the way you draw xD And >///> the guy did see the 1st one and they linked back to it.. that was real nice of them lol.

And lol, thanks! xD Yeah poor thing.

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enumatse-fluffy

Posted by enumatse-fluffy 12 years ago Report

Oh! That's awesome! > U < I'm glad they liked it! > v <

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Milliways

Posted by Milliways 12 years ago Report

You're probably my favorite vore artist on this site, cause of those awesome maws you draw :3

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Awww well THANK you! You just made my day with that. :) I sincerely appreciate it. ^///^

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ItsJustaGoober

Posted by ItsJustaGoober 12 years ago Report

...Your the best...around...nothing's ever gonna get you down!...Except for that fact that,you know,you realize that there's no hope for your escape and all...

Jokes aside,this is an awesome second of a four piece series...and I'm loving it so far...and after looking at that site,you are,no doubt,doing the characters justice.:D

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Hehehe xDD Aww thank you, I'm glad you liked it. And I'm glad to hear that I did them justice from a 2nd opinion too since you actually saw the characters from their source like me. It's nice to know!

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ItsJustaGoober

Posted by ItsJustaGoober 12 years ago Report

Mmm,yes...I think if you show'd this to them or they saw it on their own,they'd really like it!:D

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Yeah they saw that 1st picture I uploaded (the "Caught you!" one) and they linked back to it, it like made my day. :3c So I guess you were right! xD

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ItsJustaGoober

Posted by ItsJustaGoober 12 years ago Report

Wowie,that's awesome!...You have the potential...to do the best that you can!...if I fill you up with false hope,I'd be putting things in you head that'd make you feel sad if you didn't think you did good a certain picture maybe...so,I'll just be honest...the potential to do the best that you can~:3

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ItsJustaGoober

Posted by ItsJustaGoober 12 years ago Report

Slimy throat is slimy...and the best I've seen in a while...:)

Poor Chrono,though...too much all in a few matter of seconds...

Ahhhh,so that's where her watch went...XD

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Lmao, yeah, lucky watch. And yeah poor Chrono, I'm sure she feels overwhelmed! Awww thanks xD (about the throat). Thanks for your comment again! :)

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ItsJustaGoober

Posted by ItsJustaGoober 12 years ago Report

Yep,yep!...Your artwork could easily rival Karbo's...though,hhe's got more color...but,you work with what you use...right?:D

Welcome as always,and I'm going to do my best to comment on future pieces for points and constructive criticism~

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Lol aww well thanks, that's really flattering because Karbo is like my vore idol or something. (like many of us I'm sure)

And yeah, hehe, I don't color stuff very often anymore.. I just can't really find the time/inspiration since these take so much faster lol.

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ItsJustaGoober

Posted by ItsJustaGoober 12 years ago Report

No problem,my friend...and I'm sure he'd like it too...(you'd be surprised how impressed Karbo can easily be sometimes~)...But,of course for many of us...ohohohohoho~>w<

Same reason I don't...have enough time to work on it...but,not to color it...and it can look really great,even without every color in the spectrum!:D

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YuriFan

Posted by YuriFan 12 years ago Report

Gonna have to second the Karbo sentiment here. When I saw this my first thought was that this is close to Karbo quality.

Top notch work, chap.

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Awww.. well thank you..! You guys flatter me so much ^///^

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ItsJustaGoober

Posted by ItsJustaGoober 12 years ago Report

Welcome...and think little of it...I'm sure you'll continue to do even more awesome things~:D

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ItsJustaGoober

Posted by ItsJustaGoober 12 years ago Report

Awwww,that's like throwing salt on the wounds!...But,oh-so much better for us~

I found out this series when you first posted the first part and the one with the Ace of Spades...who's not in this one,I think...and you showed me the link...I have been enriched...thank you~

Also,I love the curious 3 of Clubs and,I could be wrong,the 7 of Spades...

Though,we can't forget our pred,now can we?The touch with the metal bar is very niiice.

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Lol, yeah I remember don't worry! xD And thank YOU, I'm glad you like these pictures and I'm happy to have supported a fellow vore artist by showing you their art too. ^^ Glad you got a kick out of all of it, lol.

Yeah the Ace of Spades isn't in this one, and yeah that's supposed to be 7 of Spades, hehe. Thanks a lot, I appreciate your comment :)

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ItsJustaGoober

Posted by ItsJustaGoober 12 years ago Report

Well,it's everything awesome bundled into something cute/awe-inspiring~:3

Ahhh,that clears up a lot...thank you...still think 3 is adorable,too.XD

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prisoner

Posted by prisoner 12 years ago Report

Awesome series.

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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prisoner

Posted by prisoner 12 years ago Report

Lol sorry I wasn't really sure what else to say. But I figured you had put a lot of work into this and anything nice that I had to say would probably be appreciated.

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Sehnsucht

Posted by Sehnsucht 12 years ago Report

This is an astonishing picture. I particularly love the idea of the blindfold, and again the bar across the mouth. Something about the finality of replacing the bar gives me shivers!

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Aww thanks, I really appreciate that. And the way you worded this comment made me think the bar thing was hotter myself! So.. yeah, thanks! Lol XD

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quizmaster

Posted by quizmaster 12 years ago Report

Wow. O_O How did I miss this incredible series?

I enjoyed the abstract world that you presented to us. (the audience) The point of views were very good. (I was really feeling for Chiro but, at the same time was interested with the disposition and actions of Jack of Hearts.

Oh! Also I liked how you put well thought out descriptions for us. Really added to the overall story. Faved!

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

lol, Awww, thanks..! ^///^

And I'm glad to hear that I captured both of their perspectives well too, I enjoy both perspectives (pred and prey) actually, so that's comforting to know. :)

And I'm also glad the descriptions added to it, I wasn't too sure because I never added detailed script like that before. :)

Thank you very much for your flattering comment!

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quizmaster

Posted by quizmaster 12 years ago Report

Your welcome. It was my pleasure to watch/review this masterpiece. :)

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Awww.. you're too kind ^///^

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Karbo

Posted by Karbo 12 years ago Report

I discovered this serie of picture the other day and I really loved it a lot :)
And I am glad to have managed to find the author XD
It's really an original and fascinating scene. I just love how in the end the maid let that thing covering her mouth snap back. Lot of finality in that gesture X3 and you did a very nice job on the drawing as well I think. Great work ! :D

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Awww, well thank you Karbo! That really means a lot coming from you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :3

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GUEST19216

Posted by GUEST19216 12 years ago Report

AWSOME! seriously I am going to get some cash and commission u

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Aww, well thanks for your interest, I really appreciate it. x3 I'm unfortunately closed for commission right now though, but I might re-open sometime in the future.

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Chibisama

Posted by Chibisama 12 years ago Report

These characters are super adorable.

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report

Hehe, I agree. x) Thanks!

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prisoner

Posted by prisoner 11 years ago Report

I know I already commented on this one, but I'm really glad you decided to keep it in your gallery. Her position just behind the tongue is really hot. One of my favorite positions to see prey in.

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 11 years ago Report

Awww thanks prisoner! x) Yep it's here to stay, lol. And yeah, I like that position for prey too, it's pretty much where there last shreds of hope remain. Hehe.

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prisoner

Posted by prisoner 11 years ago Report

Yes, the fleeting light and all that. I also like it because of the tongue-squish factor. The prey just sits there hoping the pred won't swallow. Mmmmm <3

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 11 years ago Report

Lol, to be honest, I never thought about that, but I will from now on whenever I see pictures like it. >///>... Man that's hot.

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Krauser

Posted by Krauser 11 years ago Report

Is this vore fatal or non fatal?

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 11 years ago Report

I guess it's up to interpretation, but I felt that it was probably fatal for this sequence, since I thought Chrono pretty much got a "game over". So not permanently-fatal, just like.. she lost a life, I guess, you could say. Lol. x)

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CasualMadness

Posted by CasualMadness 11 years ago Report

Poor little Chrono. When it comes to those Trump Maids, she just can't seem to catch a break. Such a -shame-.

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 11 years ago Report

Lol xDD Yeah, she's always getting herself eaten. Thanks for the comment :)

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Darius1972

Posted by Darius1972 11 years ago Report

I really like the way you draw throats!

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 11 years ago Report

Thanks! ^^ I'm glad to hear that.

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89gierl

Posted by 89gierl 10 years ago Report

Hey, MementoMori, mind if I ask you what she's saying? Or is it unimportant.

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 10 years ago Report

It's been a long time since I drew this one, so I don't really remember exactly what Chrono is saying, sorry ^^;

Yes it isn't important though - I purposely made it so small that it was illegible. It's mostly supposed to be humorous (it's supposed to be in the perspective of how the Trump Maid is hearing her, as if she's so small that she can't hear what she's saying, and she's not really listening anyway) xD

But I kind of remember I made Chrono saying something like "I may be small now but I'm still not afraid of you! I'll protect this land from you and your evil queen!" or something like that. XD But yeah, I don't remember the exact wording anymore, it was something along those lines if I remember, before I shrunk it to be unreadable.

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89gierl

Posted by 89gierl 10 years ago Report

Fair enough, I suspected it was for comic relief I just get curious about that kinda stuff.

Although, thanks for replying, not many would give that much. ^ .^

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Maexam2

Posted by Maexam2 10 years ago Report

Question: There is something writen in this piece. What the heck is Chrono saying? I can't read it and my browser dosen't let me incrase the page's size more.

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MementoMori

Posted by MementoMori 10 years ago Report

It's for comic relief, not meant to be legible (I purposely made it very small).

It's been a long time since I drew it, but I think I made her saying something along the lines of "I may be small now but I'm still not afraid of you! I'll protect this land from you and your evil queen!" or something like that, before I shrunk it to be unreadable. xD (She's supposed to be too tiny for the Trump Maid to really hear what she's talking about, and the Trump Maid's not really listening anyway.)

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Maexam2

Posted by Maexam2 10 years ago Report

Oh! I see. Still, being so little and yet standing up to the Trumph Maid, I can't help but finding it very cute!!!^-^

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