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This is Part 3 of the rest of the pictures I drew of camel's original characters "クロノ" and "トランプメイド" (Chrono and Trump Maid, thanks for the clarification Cruich!)
As the light of day leaves Chrono's view, she feels the Trump Maid's throat claim her, as it begins to constrict her legs and intrusively coats her in a layer of saliva. This feeling makes Chrono's body betray her a bit, as she's growing rather weak in the knees and blush claims her cheeks.. Nonetheless, she struggles in vain to reach her weaponry at least, so that she has some chance of escaping!
Even she realizes, however, that she may be past the point of no return anyway.
Art © Me
Chrono and the Trump Maids © Camel ( http://dgallon.blog75.fc2.com/ )
Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
Man,that's awesome...I'm going to assume that this is related,somewhat,to "Wonderland"...yes?:D
Poor 'Chrono'...doesn't realize that it's a vain attempt...oh well,more enjoyment for us~
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Lol yeah, the characters are from the blog linked at the bottom of the description, but I get some Alice-in-Wonderland vibes from it too. I think it is supposed to be sort of like it. :)
Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you like it! :)
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Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
Welcome,and is there a specific thing I should look for on the site?I kept going in circles.6,9;
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Oh, lol. Well I just kept clicking the クロノ tag at the right in the 'tag cloud' (I just clicked Edit >>> Find, in my browser window, then searched for "クロノ" and clicked Next until it highlighted that phrase (クロノ) in the tag cloud. Then I clicked onto that link.) Once you do that it will narrow down their posts to the ones that had pictures containing these characters.
And if you're like me in that you're not fluent in Japanese, I just used Google's translator to translate the descriptions. Basically understanding it is 10% translation, 5% common sense/context clues to make those translations make more sense, and 85% understanding the picture since art is (thankfully) a universal language. xD Hope that helps you!
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Hmm I'm not sure if this will work for you but this is the URL to the tag 'Chrono'(クロノ) xD
http://dgallon.blog75.fc2.com/?tag=%A5%AF%A5%ED%A5%CE
There you go, hope that works! But if not the method I mentioned below should work.
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Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
Pfffft,that helped alot!
Thank you,and I CAN wait to see the rest of this~
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
You're welcome, and well thanks, good thing you didn't even have to wait for it! That's always nice huh! xD
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Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
Pfffttt...that's true now...now,I can enjoy the masterpiece~
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Posted by Cruich 13 years ago Report
That second set of katakana says "toranpu meido", which can be interpreted either as "trump maid" or "tramp maid". Most likely meant to be the former, if it's card-related.
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Okay thank you! I wasn't sure that's why I was putting their names in quotes like that. I'll go and update it right now. :)
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Posted by Cruich 13 years ago Report
Glad I could help. :)
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Posted by enumatse-fluffy 13 years ago Report
Ahaha I was expecting the Jack to be male 8D;; But I guess it wouldn't be much of a maiden then, ahah XD
I'm gonna have to show my friend some of these, he has an Alice in Wonderland fetish or something ; v ;
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
LOL, yeah you know what at first I made her boobies too small so she looked like a trap.. and I was really not sure whether to leave it but I ended up changing it since they're not mine, hahaha. But yeah I ♥ traps as I think we've discussed x3
And oh does he? LOL!
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Posted by enumatse-fluffy 13 years ago Report
Ahaha yeah > U < I saw that her boobs weren't quite as large as the Ace's, so I was hopeful that maybe it was male, so I checked the tags for F/F or M/F... and I saw F/F and I was just like ". A . Damn" ahaha XD
I think it'd look really good as a trap, not that there'd be too much of a difference > U <;
Yeah ; v ;~ He obsessed over the American Mcgee games and does Alice-themed RP's and he wanted to buy merchandise for it super super bad but it'd be a really bad idea to buy a huge knife when you have siblings that are 11 years old XDD
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Hehehe, aww sorry! xD But yeah I thought the same thing too, they would have made a cute trap too. :3c
LOL I see. That's too funny, Omg that mental-image.. not pretty. xDD
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Posted by enumatse-fluffy 13 years ago Report
Oh wow, the way you do throat shots is amazing . A . You even make the uvula scrunch up ; U ;
I especially love how calm the maiden seems to be too > U <
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Aww thank you fluffy.. ^///^ Hehe
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Posted by redsquallff8 13 years ago Report
LOVE THE MAW SHOT
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Thank you! xD
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Posted by redsquallff8 13 years ago Report
nice texture on this scene
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Thanks! I appreciate that :)
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Posted by enumatse-fluffy 13 years ago Report
; A ; Wow, if the guy that created these characters saw this I'm pretty sure they'd be amazed--I was browsing through the link and it just. Wow. I need to get better at drawing hahaha XD
I love how curious the 3 of clubs is, ahaha > U <
... And awwww, she swallowed her weapon with her too--poor Chrono, ahaha ; U ;
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Lol aww I like the way you draw xD And >///> the guy did see the 1st one and they linked back to it.. that was real nice of them lol.
And lol, thanks! xD Yeah poor thing.
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Posted by enumatse-fluffy 13 years ago Report
Oh! That's awesome! > U < I'm glad they liked it! > v <
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Posted by Milliways 13 years ago Report
You're probably my favorite vore artist on this site, cause of those awesome maws you draw :3
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Awww well THANK you! You just made my day with that. :) I sincerely appreciate it. ^///^
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Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
...Your the best...around...nothing's ever gonna get you down!...Except for that fact that,you know,you realize that there's no hope for your escape and all...
Jokes aside,this is an awesome second of a four piece series...and I'm loving it so far...and after looking at that site,you are,no doubt,doing the characters justice.:D
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Hehehe xDD Aww thank you, I'm glad you liked it. And I'm glad to hear that I did them justice from a 2nd opinion too since you actually saw the characters from their source like me. It's nice to know!
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Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
Mmm,yes...I think if you show'd this to them or they saw it on their own,they'd really like it!:D
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Yeah they saw that 1st picture I uploaded (the "Caught you!" one) and they linked back to it, it like made my day. :3c So I guess you were right! xD
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Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
Wowie,that's awesome!...You have the potential...to do the best that you can!...if I fill you up with false hope,I'd be putting things in you head that'd make you feel sad if you didn't think you did good a certain picture maybe...so,I'll just be honest...the potential to do the best that you can~:3
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Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
Slimy throat is slimy...and the best I've seen in a while...:)
Poor Chrono,though...too much all in a few matter of seconds...
Ahhhh,so that's where her watch went...XD
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Lmao, yeah, lucky watch. And yeah poor Chrono, I'm sure she feels overwhelmed! Awww thanks xD (about the throat). Thanks for your comment again! :)
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Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
Yep,yep!...Your artwork could easily rival Karbo's...though,hhe's got more color...but,you work with what you use...right?:D
Welcome as always,and I'm going to do my best to comment on future pieces for points and constructive criticism~
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Lol aww well thanks, that's really flattering because Karbo is like my vore idol or something. (like many of us I'm sure)
And yeah, hehe, I don't color stuff very often anymore.. I just can't really find the time/inspiration since these take so much faster lol.
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Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
No problem,my friend...and I'm sure he'd like it too...(you'd be surprised how impressed Karbo can easily be sometimes~)...But,of course for many of us...ohohohohoho~>w<
Same reason I don't...have enough time to work on it...but,not to color it...and it can look really great,even without every color in the spectrum!:D
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Posted by YuriFan 13 years ago Report
Gonna have to second the Karbo sentiment here. When I saw this my first thought was that this is close to Karbo quality.
Top notch work, chap.
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Awww.. well thank you..! You guys flatter me so much ^///^
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Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
Welcome...and think little of it...I'm sure you'll continue to do even more awesome things~:D
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Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
Awwww,that's like throwing salt on the wounds!...But,oh-so much better for us~
I found out this series when you first posted the first part and the one with the Ace of Spades...who's not in this one,I think...and you showed me the link...I have been enriched...thank you~
Also,I love the curious 3 of Clubs and,I could be wrong,the 7 of Spades...
Though,we can't forget our pred,now can we?The touch with the metal bar is very niiice.
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Lol, yeah I remember don't worry! xD And thank YOU, I'm glad you like these pictures and I'm happy to have supported a fellow vore artist by showing you their art too. ^^ Glad you got a kick out of all of it, lol.
Yeah the Ace of Spades isn't in this one, and yeah that's supposed to be 7 of Spades, hehe. Thanks a lot, I appreciate your comment :)
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Posted by ItsJustaGoober 13 years ago Report
Well,it's everything awesome bundled into something cute/awe-inspiring~:3
Ahhh,that clears up a lot...thank you...still think 3 is adorable,too.XD
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Posted by prisoner 13 years ago Report
Awesome series.
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Posted by prisoner 13 years ago Report
Lol sorry I wasn't really sure what else to say. But I figured you had put a lot of work into this and anything nice that I had to say would probably be appreciated.
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Posted by Sehnsucht 13 years ago Report
This is an astonishing picture. I particularly love the idea of the blindfold, and again the bar across the mouth. Something about the finality of replacing the bar gives me shivers!
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Aww thanks, I really appreciate that. And the way you worded this comment made me think the bar thing was hotter myself! So.. yeah, thanks! Lol XD
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Posted by quizmaster 13 years ago Report
Wow. O_O How did I miss this incredible series?
I enjoyed the abstract world that you presented to us. (the audience) The point of views were very good. (I was really feeling for Chiro but, at the same time was interested with the disposition and actions of Jack of Hearts.
Oh! Also I liked how you put well thought out descriptions for us. Really added to the overall story. Faved!
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
lol, Awww, thanks..! ^///^
And I'm glad to hear that I captured both of their perspectives well too, I enjoy both perspectives (pred and prey) actually, so that's comforting to know. :)
And I'm also glad the descriptions added to it, I wasn't too sure because I never added detailed script like that before. :)
Thank you very much for your flattering comment!
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Posted by quizmaster 13 years ago Report
Your welcome. It was my pleasure to watch/review this masterpiece. :)
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Awww.. you're too kind ^///^
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Posted by Karbo 13 years ago Report
I discovered this serie of picture the other day and I really loved it a lot :)
And I am glad to have managed to find the author XD
It's really an original and fascinating scene. I just love how in the end the maid let that thing covering her mouth snap back. Lot of finality in that gesture X3 and you did a very nice job on the drawing as well I think. Great work ! :D
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Awww, well thank you Karbo! That really means a lot coming from you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :3
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Posted by GUEST19216 13 years ago Report
AWSOME! seriously I am going to get some cash and commission u
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Aww, well thanks for your interest, I really appreciate it. x3 I'm unfortunately closed for commission right now though, but I might re-open sometime in the future.
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Posted by Chibisama 13 years ago Report
These characters are super adorable.
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Posted by MementoMori 13 years ago Report
Hehe, I agree. x) Thanks!
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Posted by prisoner 12 years ago Report
I know I already commented on this one, but I'm really glad you decided to keep it in your gallery. Her position just behind the tongue is really hot. One of my favorite positions to see prey in.
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Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report
Awww thanks prisoner! x) Yep it's here to stay, lol. And yeah, I like that position for prey too, it's pretty much where there last shreds of hope remain. Hehe.
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Posted by prisoner 12 years ago Report
Yes, the fleeting light and all that. I also like it because of the tongue-squish factor. The prey just sits there hoping the pred won't swallow. Mmmmm <3
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Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report
Lol, to be honest, I never thought about that, but I will from now on whenever I see pictures like it. >///>... Man that's hot.
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Posted by Krauser 12 years ago Report
Is this vore fatal or non fatal?
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Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report
I guess it's up to interpretation, but I felt that it was probably fatal for this sequence, since I thought Chrono pretty much got a "game over". So not permanently-fatal, just like.. she lost a life, I guess, you could say. Lol. x)
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Posted by CasualMadness 12 years ago Report
Poor little Chrono. When it comes to those Trump Maids, she just can't seem to catch a break. Such a -shame-.
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Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report
Lol xDD Yeah, she's always getting herself eaten. Thanks for the comment :)
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Posted by Darius1972 12 years ago Report
I really like the way you draw throats!
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Posted by MementoMori 12 years ago Report
Thanks! ^^ I'm glad to hear that.
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Posted by 89gierl 11 years ago Report
Hey, MementoMori, mind if I ask you what she's saying? Or is it unimportant.
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Posted by MementoMori 11 years ago Report
It's been a long time since I drew this one, so I don't really remember exactly what Chrono is saying, sorry ^^;
Yes it isn't important though - I purposely made it so small that it was illegible. It's mostly supposed to be humorous (it's supposed to be in the perspective of how the Trump Maid is hearing her, as if she's so small that she can't hear what she's saying, and she's not really listening anyway) xD
But I kind of remember I made Chrono saying something like "I may be small now but I'm still not afraid of you! I'll protect this land from you and your evil queen!" or something like that. XD But yeah, I don't remember the exact wording anymore, it was something along those lines if I remember, before I shrunk it to be unreadable.
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Posted by 89gierl 11 years ago Report
Fair enough, I suspected it was for comic relief I just get curious about that kinda stuff.
Although, thanks for replying, not many would give that much. ^ .^
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Posted by Maexam2 11 years ago Report
Question: There is something writen in this piece. What the heck is Chrono saying? I can't read it and my browser dosen't let me incrase the page's size more.
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Posted by MementoMori 11 years ago Report
It's for comic relief, not meant to be legible (I purposely made it very small).
It's been a long time since I drew it, but I think I made her saying something along the lines of "I may be small now but I'm still not afraid of you! I'll protect this land from you and your evil queen!" or something like that, before I shrunk it to be unreadable. xD (She's supposed to be too tiny for the Trump Maid to really hear what she's talking about, and the Trump Maid's not really listening anyway.)
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Posted by Maexam2 11 years ago Report
Oh! I see. Still, being so little and yet standing up to the Trumph Maid, I can't help but finding it very cute!!!^-^
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