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Rude Awakening By TwrchTwryth -- Report

Uploaded: 13 years ago

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Another departure from the norm for me -- cock vore. Short, sweet, to the point.

When I first started this story, it was going to be a bit more lighthearted than it ended up being. It's certainly not grim, but the prey isn't nearly as happy as in my usual stories.

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shwarzwald

Posted by shwarzwald 13 years ago Report

Well I give it 8/10. It almost got me there. ^_^

Throat_Wolf

Posted by Throat_Wolf 13 years ago Report

I'm not terribly fond of fatal endings, but for all of that it was quite well-written.

dragon32078

Posted by dragon32078 13 years ago Report

I absolutely loved this story. It has gotten me there. I would love it if you wrote more using these two characters. Especially if they started comparing future 'conquests' with this one.

KrasnyiKoiot

Posted by KrasnyiKoiot 10 years ago Report

Fun bit've a scene, this! Surprised I'd not come across it beforehand.

ShadesofBlack

Posted by ShadesofBlack 10 years ago Report

Wow, glad you linked back to this! I love the casual predation. This is... about as unwilling as I can enjoy, but I enjoyed it. Composed acceptance.