A scene commissioned from  4ofSwords . I have been having problems in my own writing on how to describe what I see in my mind's eye of how my character Minx absorbs her lovers/prey; so I passed the buck to someone I consider a better writer (well and his offering $15 1k word mini-scene commissions was too good to pass up).

This piece is from the prey's POV and shows very well how erotic Minx makes it for her prey and how fractured the experience is for the prey at the same time. How hard would it be for the human mind to interpret and retain its sanity to go through and survive being absorbed by another? This question has haunted my writing for three years now and why there is so little RP'ed or written about Minx.

But I absolutely love the yuri scene set-up.

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