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In she goes.
Typically, I would usually end the story here, but I'm debating if I should do one more part after this one. I've been thinking about digestion imagery lately, as well as the fact that I usually don't like to show interior shots from an aftermath scene.
I know a lot of people would prefer not to see the less attractive aspects of a post-vore scene, much less consider what might actaully happen after a giant plant swallows a human. Hmmm, I guess I'll give it some thought.
In the meantime, here's the next part of the little story.
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"Her eyes were half-closed and her mind was a blur from the narcotic effect of the liquid that was injected into her body. The last coherent thought in her mind was the sensation of being lowered into the flower and the giant petals reaching upwards to enclose around her body.
With only her lower body hanging out from the flower, the tendrils of a stamen pulled several times on her trousers before her boots finally came off, releasing her from the last piece of clothing. Completely naked now, and her wrists bound behind her back with a tendril fragment, the plant pulled the woman deeper within itself, into a pool of clear liquid.
At the bottom of the flower where the petals connected to the stalk, an orifice opened and the plant’s tendrils guided and pushed Olivia downwards into the dark tunnel within the plant’s stalk.
Inside the tunnel, light from the outside world could be faintly seen through the semi-translucent walls of the stalk. The interior of the stalk squeezed around the woman’s body, moving rhythmically, pulling her further downwards, assisted by a slime-like liquid excreted from the interior walls of the stalk.
Olivia’s final destination was a bulb-like chamber at the base of the plant. As her body neared, digestive fluids began to fill the chamber in preparation for the final phase."
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Posted by Leshana 13 years ago Report
What? Who would prefer not to see the post-vore scene? That's goosery
Posted by donutwish 13 years ago Report
I think it's mostly more of the watchers on my DA account. Some of them are a lot more sensitive when it comes to content that depicts or even implies fatality or gore. People here seem to have a stronger stomach for it!
Posted by Emperor_Palpatine 13 years ago Report
Sensitive? Jesus, they're the most deluded vores I've ever heard of. :D
Posted by NekoYuki 13 years ago Report
Well then just put a warning up and tell them not to look if they don't like to see it >...> people that look at things just to complain about them annoy me
Posted by Leshana 13 years ago Report
Fatality is one of the best themes in vore
Posted by BeGad 13 years ago Report
I'd go for a post-vore scene.
Posted by Liz 13 years ago Report
I have to say that one of the reasons I like this comic so much is Yes it has a hot busty woman being stripped and swallowed by a plant and to me that is always appealing.
However, I also love the use of colours that makes the pictures in this comic stand out greatly. The tones and shades are really appealing.
Once of you best comics IMO - great work mate :D
Posted by donutwish 13 years ago Report
Thanks! I spend a considerable amount of time working on the visuals, and as important as the story is, it's also my priority to make sure everything looks appealing. So I'm glad someone appreciates it!
Posted by Liz 13 years ago Report
It shows mate :D
Posted by CGR-7 13 years ago Report
Well actually D.W., if you wanna go with a final page it doesn’t need to be too graphic or anything if you don't want.
If this plant digests its prey like a Venus flytrap would, all the “gore” of blood and tissue would be absorbed by the plant and all that would remain would be her clean skeleton to be expelled.
For a flytrap, the husk (as it’s called) is left in the trap to fall out. For your plant here, the bones could be regurgitated and spit out; simple as that.
What do you think? =D
I know you’re a fan of leaving some things to imagination. ;D
Posted by donutwish 13 years ago Report
I'm getting some ideas so far and a general direction that I think I'll take for the final page. I think you're right in that there wouldn't be a huge need to be too graphic in this scenario. Well let's see what I can come up!
Posted by BeGad 13 years ago Report
Huh, thinking about it, I like this idea best...
Posted by ublover1 13 years ago Report
Very hot!!!
Posted by Angel 13 years ago Report
Very nice work! I'd love to see an inside scene and an after scene, really.
Posted by donutwish 13 years ago Report
It seems like there's a lot of folks who want to see an interior and after scene, so I'll see what I can do!
Posted by Slimeman64 13 years ago Report
*GULP!* Olivia makes good plant food!
In my opinion, if you want to do it, go for it! But, if you do, I suggest for DA, you just censor it to Oliva laying in a pool of fluids unconscious. An for Eka's, you can show the whole shabang in sequence.
Either way, nice job on these comics!
Posted by donutwish 13 years ago Report
I'm going to go ahead and do a post-vore scene. I think my idea for it will be safe for DA but appealing for everyone. I'm kinda fail when it comes to drawing really gruesome stuff anyway.
Posted by HeroSoulSword 13 years ago Report
I agree with everyone else, a post-vore scene would be killer. With the details and effort you put into your work, it would be a shame to waste such an opportunity. However, if you do one, I don't suggest giving it to DA, as we've all seen, they can be a little too touchy about that. But for here, we would be most appreciative if you did us the favor of doing a post-vore scene. However, it is your call, but we would love it if you decide to do it.
Posted by donutwish 13 years ago Report
I just finished doing a rough sketch for the post-vore page. There won't be any ambiguity about what's being shown, but I think it'll have enough subtlety not to freak anyone out (too much). I'm not one to draw really graphic gore anyway, so hopefully it won't look too lame.
Posted by blackrain 13 years ago Report
Love the bulge in the plants stem!
Posted by mynick8888 13 years ago Report
i like this but please one more part, please o^_^o
Posted by Tabatha_Cat 13 years ago Report
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, lovely!
The three pictures on the left in particular show a story and are very nice. They're a little small though, and I wonder if you'd consider doing a close-up of them.
And count me as one who'd love to see a part 6. Perhaps it doesn't need to go up on your DA account?
Posted by donutwish 13 years ago Report
That's one of the problems when you work within a strictly set dimension and size - sometimes the layout has to be squeezed to fit in the page. The original work files are much, much larger, so maybe when I'm finally done the series (yes, I'm going to do a final part for the digestion phase) I'll upload some close-up detail images of selected panels from the series. Thanks for the feedback!
Posted by Shetira 13 years ago Report
I'd personally love to see the grand finale of this lovely sequence. ^.^
Posted by donutwish 13 years ago Report
Stay tuned...it's coming!
Posted by olddud 13 years ago Report
would be nice if you did something more then just plane digestion, like maybe she get transformed in to a plant women are something. and the she gos out and eats people and Absorb them. =)
Posted by donutwish 13 years ago Report
I wasn't planning on doing anything beyond digestion. A few people have suggested absorption/transformation ideas like yours, and maybe that's something I might consider in a future series.
Posted by Tabatha_Cat 13 years ago Report
Just to add, I was wondering how the flower was going to deal with those pants and shoes. I even thought perhaps it would have to digest them as well, but you (and the plant) found a far more creative solution to the problem.
It's incredibly sexy the way she just hangs helpless from her pants entangled about her legs. I usually like wriggling prey, but this works just perfectly here, having her hanging limp as the plant slowly swings her over and lowers her to be devoured. The bulb engulfs and pulls down its prey, while the pants and shoes held by the vines are naturally pulled free. The last shot of her bare legs, one limp, the other stretched taught only to fall limp itself as her pants come free, while the rest of her has already been pulled down the bulb well on the way to becoming plant food, is just murrrrrrr. Very nice.
I'm looking forward to the last shot. And I don't mean to be greedy, but f you ever feel moved to do other shots of this sequence from different angles or at different times (say for example, a picture of her feet disappearing down the bulb), I'm sure many of us would enjoy them. This is a fantastic sequence.
Posted by donutwish 13 years ago Report
I like wriggling and struggling prey too, especially when they put up a fight, but sometimes it's just as interesting when the prey is completely subdued. Both scenarios are seen in nature, but there's something arousing about a prey that is completely helpless.
I usually leave my series as they are, once they are finished. Mostly because my mind will have switched gears to a new series, and I'll be tired (and sometimes frustrated) from drawing the old stuff.
Of course, when it comes to commissions, that's a different story!
Posted by temporos 13 years ago Report
I say definitely go for the post-vore ending. You don't even need to do an internal shot, if you're squeemish about that sort of thing. You could do a panel progression showing how the outside of the plant (shape, colour, etc) changes as she's broken down and absorbed. There's also no need to spit out bones or hair, since the plant would likely break down calcium carbonates fairly easily.
Posted by donutwish 13 years ago Report
I'm working on the final part as we speak. It's certainly turning out as difficult as I thought it would be, but I guess a challenge is a good thing.