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M/f (implied M/m and F/m), Monster/human, sex and oral vore. 6.5k words.
A very 'naughty' young woman is visited before Christmas, but not by St. Nick.
This isn't -exactly- a birthday present for Conn - if it was, I probably would have used a different predator. But I had him in mind as much as I was continuing to try to push into M/f territory, and as much as I wanted to post a Christmas story in general. Either way, Happy Birthday, Conn!
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Posted by Bright 12 years ago Report
Well written. I didn't see any errors of grammar or plot.
Posted by 4ofSwords 12 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by nephilim 12 years ago Report
Will read later...
Posted by 4ofSwords 12 years ago Report
Speaking of, did you get a chance to look at this?
Posted by nephilim 12 years ago Report
Not yet. I will be able to read it this weekend (:
Posted by Jack 12 years ago Report
Very nice to read, and very much enjoyed.
In particular, I like how you limited the descriptions on what she could sense after Noelle had been changed. Gives a good feeling of her situation.
Posted by 4ofSwords 12 years ago Report
Thanks!