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I've put this in my "Vore Quiz" folder simply because, although it's not a Vore Quiz story, it focuses on a character from Story 38: Esha.
This is my first 'interactive' story. The food eaten by the girls here, and the questions they answer, were all chosen by some of *you*, members of the Eka's Portal community. To find out more, you can visit this thread: http://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=18&t=33457 .
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Posted by Justin Bailey 11 years ago Report
Yay! Nicely written. And that was quite a lot of food there.
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
It was indeed; two very stuffed tummies. ;) Thanks.
Posted by TheWiking2000 11 years ago Report
I really like the chit chat and banter back and forth between Kristen and Esha. It makes it easy to imagine whatching that video oneself!
Thanks for letting them anwer my questions!
I'm not a food-vore type of guy but you mixed it in good with the questions so it was always interesting. I would however, just to be annoying, reply to Esha that a "nervous system" has no moral dimension either ;) But, it's a good and realistic answer usually given by most vegitarians (except those that for some strange reason eat fish and shelfish).
I like the nonchalance of Kirsten and her playful nature. Her respons to having eaten the un-named guy reminds me of how Virginia treated her meal in the latest "Forbidden Dish"-story "With a Little Help from my Friends", which I also liked alot.
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
I read "With a Little Help from my Friends" a few days ago, and enjoyed it too. There's something sweet about a nice, "caring" pred, but there's something exciting about a totally uncaring one (like Virginia) too!
Of course, Kirsten really didn't have much idea what type of "predator" she'd be before she started!
Thanks; I'm glad you enjoyed it, despite not being into "food vore". (Personally, I find there are few things more erotic than the sight of an attractive woman eating.) The questions indeed made it possible to mix in a bit of "teasing" all along.
Posted by Plasmids 11 years ago Report
After reading this story, I must say that you did an excellent job writing describing my character in relation to vore.
I can really picture myself with that same kind of attitude and behavior when I'm surrounded by two giant women, knowing one of them is going to make my dream come true.
I also like how Esha was the one that was given the pleasure of devouring Brian (me) and granting not only her wish, but mine as well. She was everything that I picture in a gentle giantess and if that was really me in the story, I would be happy to have been eaten by such a kind and gentle woman like her.
You really have a way of bringing out the realism in your stories and your characters. I really enjoy a lot of your written works when it comes to willing or even general soft vore.
Overall, I would say that your story was by far the best gentle vore story that I have ever read and I was proud to be a part of it! Thank you so much for allowing me the chance to give you my character and personality so that you could write it into your story!
Keep up the excellent work and thank you again for placing my personality into your story!
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
I'm pleased that you like it! It's the first time I try to factor in someone's personality that way. Thanks for the comment.
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
I enjoyed watching this come through to fruition. The conversation between the characters flowed really well and was fun to read. Having Andy in the mix was an interesting twist on it.
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thank you. Andy, of course, was supposed (for the video) to be a silent and invisible presence (although the men on the table could see him), but it was inevitable that his presence would be felt.
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
Yup! He was kind of like the policeman who keeps people driving the speedlimit whether he's there or not. He had a definite effect on shaping way I looked at Esha and what I expected she would do. :)
Posted by atak 11 years ago Report
Loved getting to see a couple of my questions in there and how they got answered. It was very fun and awesome to see, and to see the guys getting uncomfortable and nervous and all, knowing and hearing how they were going to be food... not even allowed to ask questions, just being food waiting to get ate.
I do like to imagine what must have happened after the camera was shut off, what it was like for the guys especially, and for Andy and everyone else... Of how the meal turned out, when the girls were done casually digesting it. Hopefully they digested well! ^^
Awesome story, as always!
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Heh yes, there's a lot to imagine for what happened after. ;) Thanks.