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A companion to another mad-science themed story from long ago. Basically, a number of sexy ladies in a laboratory run afoul of the giant voracious worm-creature being kept there.
This version is slightly edited from how it appeared at DT, because several people said the end was confusing. If you read the old version, let me know what ya' think.
Finally, I was planning a follow-up with the giant slug + sexy tourists, and if this gets a good amount of positive response here, I'll likely go ahead with it.
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Posted by Lacrymal 11 years ago Report
Awesome story Prinny. Please, please, please write the sequel! :)
Posted by PrinnyDood 11 years ago Report
Haha, thanks! I guess I'll take that as one enthusiastic vote for the sequel, eh?
Posted by ouphe 11 years ago Report
Please!
Posted by PrinnyDood 11 years ago Report
Guess that makes two who'd like to see that sequel, huh? :D
Posted by Darksaber 11 years ago Report
Sequel! Sequel! This was awesome!
Posted by PrinnyDood 11 years ago Report
Thank you! ^_^
That makes three votes for 'do the sequel', which is a decent amount of response for a story at Eka's. If there are many more, I'm gonna have to make the thing a priority. xD
Posted by BeGad 11 years ago Report
Ah, this makes me sad, missing DT so...
Posted by PrinnyDood 11 years ago Report
Hey, don't give up yet! There's still no actual confirmation of death, and someone found Doc's Email recently, so who knows; maybe it'll be back after all.
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Hehe... Susan is certainly good at keeping her cool! *Slightly* callous, one might say, but clever... The alien putting on an act, then being forced to reveal its nature, was amusing.
Posted by PrinnyDood 11 years ago Report
Only slightly? You should what happens to interns who piss her off. xD
But yes, even in these more . . . vore-centric stories, I must admit a soft spot for the truly cunning persons. Sometimes I even surprise myself with who ends up surviving.
Posted by sgtpepper500 11 years ago Report
A sequel would be awesome!
Posted by PrinnyDood 11 years ago Report
Thanks! I may just have to do that at some point.
Posted by Toad 11 years ago Report
Another vote from me for a sequel! Of course I already voted for that at DT... As for the ending, tbh I don't remember the exact phrasing you used before but I know I didn't find it particularly confusing - but this version would seem to be a bit clearer. Keep up the good work! :)
Posted by PrinnyDood 11 years ago Report
OK, I think that's about the threshold, gonna have to do the followup sometime! :D
Anyway, thanks a bunch, and I'm glad I seem to have cleaned the ending up a touch.
Posted by thisgirlroolzz 11 years ago Report
PLease, please, please. sequel!!!! sooon!!!
Maybe now that its full it can take its time and please a few of the girls as it swallows them?
Posted by PrinnyDood 11 years ago Report
Haha, thanks for the enthusiasm! xD Glad to see you over here at Eka's as well.
And . . . I have been known to favor a bit of naughty tentacle action from time to time, so we'll just have to see how it goes. :3
Posted by duster316 11 years ago Report
Another vote for the sequel here! Good to see returning characters too! Hopefully Shyle will get some more tentacle action next time around.
I'm wondering just how big "Ziggy" is though.
Posted by PrinnyDood 11 years ago Report
Thanks! The sequel will indeed most likely include additional tentacle action for all involved. ;3
I'm actually really bad with determining relative sizes and that sort of thing, so I usually just leave the specifics vague, so as not to explicitly contradict myself. 'Ziggy' is big enough to devour 6+ full grown women though, so pretty damn big, I'd wager. But still a good bit smaller than the slug-alien who will be co-starring in the sequel. :P
Posted by anais2000 11 years ago Report
I know you're busy with the Sorority sequel (and I can't wait for it) but this is another story worth a follow-up! Those college girls are so doomed! :)
Posted by PrinnyDood 11 years ago Report
They may be doomed, but at least they'll surely put on a great show in the process! :3
But yeah, I really do want to write the sequel to this one as well, and actually have had most of the opening bits done for some time, but I do lose track of things sometimes . . . xD
In any case, I'm very much committed to finishing it up at some point, though it may be a while yet given the other projects (like the Sorority thing) I'm working on at the moment. But who knows, my muse is rather fickle, and I pretty much have to do as she says, creative-stuff-wise, so it might be sooner rather than later.
Posted by longwayofftiff 6 years ago Report
I know how I kill it!!!! Yessss!!! I figured it out!!! Aren't you proud of me?
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Well, probably a whole lot of things can kill it. Enough bullets/explosions would certainly do the job. The trick, of course, would be not getting devoured first.
Posted by longwayofftiff 6 years ago Report
We happen to specialize in just such situations.
Posted by Nalzindar 3 years ago Report
Come to think of it, I never read the first story with Dr. Shyle! But I must say, she is very much herself, from her first appearance and forward, a formidable woman with a brain and appearance to match. I like the details you gave her, especially bad eye-sight with a dependence of strong spectacles to see properly.
The alien is worm is very much a recognizable one with its fondness for girls/women in later stories. I also like how this story developed and how Shyle manages to stay calm and composed where most others (for obvious reasons) panic.
What more, when reading this, I quickly realized which scene that most deserves an illustration ; )
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thanks! This is a heck of an old one, so I'm glad to hear it holds up alright still. :D
This was certainly the start of a lengthy series, though at this time I wrote it, I had no idea exactly where it would end up. xD