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Here's my first try at making a vore novel. I don't know what the name should be, but I am open to suggestions. Please leave a comment critiquing what you like and dislike about my writing as well as the story, it would be very helpful.
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Posted by joeburp22181 11 years ago Report
Damn good start USful, would like to see more.
Posted by USful 11 years ago Report
Thanks, in the process of writing the next one.
Posted by USful 11 years ago Report
Second Chapter is up!
Posted by sarkonis 11 years ago Report
A good beginning that shows a lot of promis for the upcoming chapters.I really like the setting. I know this is a minor point but there were a few typeos here and there, but I'm just being picky. Keep it up!
Posted by USful 11 years ago Report
Thanks for the comment. Glad you liked it. :D
Posted by sarkonis 11 years ago Report
And as my last post is an example, I made typing mistakes too :P
Posted by USful 11 years ago Report
Second chapter is up!
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 11 years ago Report
VERY nice for a first chapter! What else can I say but, 'more please!'
Posted by USful 11 years ago Report
I'll try to get the second chapter finished before Sunday
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 11 years ago Report
Yay! Looking foreword to it! : )
Posted by USful 11 years ago Report
I am running behind schedule... :/ The next chapter will be out anytime next week, though I am hoping that I will be able to finish it before Monday...
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 11 years ago Report
That's ok, 'rush the author/artist, and you get a piece of shit'. It's worth the wait to know you finished the next part fully.
Posted by USful 11 years ago Report
Second chapter is out! I had writer's block near the end, so i decided that I would just end it at another cliff hanger. >:D
Posted by Entity 11 years ago Report
I like this concept very much, you have me hooked :)
Posted by USful 11 years ago Report
glad you like it