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This was written in response to a suggestion / request from petitepred. I wrote the actual story, but much of the basic storyline is something that we discussed together. The character of Ling belongs to petitepred.
The Forbidden Dish restaurant chain was created by girlfood. The existence of a branch in Paris is not intended to be canon.
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Posted by petitepred 11 years ago Report
This was really nice and masterful! Thanks so much.
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
I'm very glad you enjoyed it! It was a pleasure to write.
Posted by Luckless 11 years ago Report
This is your Opus and it is magnificent. Bravo. Favorited and to be remembered as the hallmark of French Snackesque vore for generations to come. This is truly one of the best vore stories to be read. Thank you for making it.
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thank *you* very much for that kind comment!
Posted by Krauser 11 years ago Report
Awesome story, awesome inside stomach descriptions. Love it
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by mach-one 11 years ago Report
I really enjoy these "Forbidden Dish" themed stories. Like usual, they are all around well done. Specially because of how realistic the routine feels, the characters and all - the "everyday peolpe" feel the preds have makes the story quite a turn on.
However, as the horror story fan i am, the Forbidden Dish itself fascinates me. It's quite a sinister place, really. How the prey is manipulated into hurrying inside the shrink machine, and how they are not encouraged to look around; how they actually sell unwilling prey (which probably while being mostly people who changed their minds, might very well consist on people who might turn "problematic")... Watching this terrifying inn evolve makes the stories even more enjoyable.
As for this one, it did seem a bit slow at some points but ir was effin' great all around.
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thanks. Yes, the Forbidden Dish setting has potential in a variety of directions... not least horror, indeed!
Posted by jmazzola1 11 years ago Report
I love it when you write about Asian girls! A girl like Ling would be preferable for me, but I wouldn't want to die inside her, just explore her digestive tract. I would ask that she eat me with Chinese food(her digestive system was probably designed for it and native food would likely be the easiest for her to digest). Wonder why you didn't include a toilet scene here like you usually do? I suggest depicting Mitsuko or Ling using a Squat Toilet, a toilet that is common in China and Japan. It is also seen as more natural than sitting.
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thanks for the comment. To answer your question: Since Ling is based by request on a real person, it would have seemed a little indelicate to describe her going to the toilet. ;)
Posted by jmazzola1 11 years ago Report
Oh I get it. Say, why haven't you wrote a story centering on Mitsuko?
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Because I haven't had a specific interesting idea concerning her. And I have lots of plans for other stories instead. But we'll see her again at some point.
Posted by girlfood 11 years ago Report
Well done! Great attention to detail. I felt like it was a real diary of someone visiting Paris.
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thanks! I enjoyed writing it.
Posted by miniboy 10 years ago Report
wow,i am a chinese boy and live near Shanghai University in
shanghai,can i know Ling when she is back shanghai,
Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report
Hehe… Maybe! If she's tempted to eat people again.
Posted by miniboy 10 years ago Report
wow,i am a chinese boy and live near Shanghai University in
shanghai,can i know Ling when she is back shanghai,
Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report
I like the story FS. Just wondering why this one isn't filed into the Forbidden Dish folder.
Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report
Oh, you're right. I've moved it.