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I'm not entirely sure why I wrote this one... It came to me suddenly one evening when I (finally!) had a bit of free time, so I set right to it.
Technically, it's a Felaryan story, in the sense that it's based on Felaryan views of the afterlife.
It draws on the Felaryan wiki's descriptions of the afterlife (notably Acheron), for which most of the credit goes to Karbo. Credit also to Amaroq for the realm of Ôzora; and to Jasconius for the malphasites and allus.
Edit: This story now has a continuation, here: http://aryion.com/g4/view/326560 .
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Posted by Littledude 11 years ago Report
It's good to branch out and try new stuff that comes to you.
Posted by Indighost 11 years ago Report
Really nice story. You've got a real skill for describing strange, fantastic worlds. I can't believe I'm saying this, but i might have enjoyed the first few page of descriptions more thn the vore part of the story :3
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Heh; thank you! That's unusual, but I'm very glad if I was able to make that world come to life. I'm pleased you enjoyed it!
Posted by emuxioxio 11 years ago Report
I must confess that I rarely comment - not out of dis respect but sheer laziness. I have read all of your stuff and you have my apologies for my lack of displayed appreciation.
But as ever, his is -really- good. A very... therapeutic read.
It appeals to my personal tastes a great deal more than your usual stuff, so I am likely to be biased but the elements of a story I usually don't care much for were in deed the most intriguing parts to this piece, in my opinion.
Quite a tender story, tastefully written!
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
Thank you! I appreciate the comment, and I'm glad if the story elements were as enjoyable as the vore. I'm pleased the tenderness aspect came across well, too.
Glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by Shingami 11 years ago Report
I've never really been that interested in the heaven/hell angel/demon thing but this story intrigued me I may have to look into it more
thanks great story
Posted by French_snack 11 years ago Report
You're welcome; thanks for the comment.