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Alternite Title: Dragon-Girl Feeding Habits
A hot-spring full of naked, nubile princesses and a giantess dragon-girl with an appetite for female royalty have a wonderful, healthy time together interacting in the most natural way they can. :3
Anyway, this the first winner of my new Vignette Theater at last. Ended up being a bit longer than I intended, but I got a bit carried away and whatnot. The next poll should be up by tomorrow, because I'm too lazy to do it today.
Story was inspired by this picture, and I am borrowing the dragon-lady in question with permission. All credit to Karbo: http://aryion.com/g4/view/214230
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Posted by Shingami 11 years ago Report
Very entertaining
Posted by PrinnyDood 11 years ago Report
Thanks! That was my goal. :D
Posted by Lum_the_mad 11 years ago Report
A very entertaining little piece. I particularly liked that you added in Karbo's punchline to your story, although the knight then changing his tune to it being a bald princess was... somewhere between hilarious, and pathetic xD Was the dragon having seen him before because Karbo's picture was sort of a preamble to this story, with this being a sequel? Because that would make this even more perfect xD
My one major criticism is that I think your parentheses or brackets turned into – which you might need to fix at some point. Otherwise your punctuation, spelling, vocabulary, and adjectives to describe delicious princess flesh were all top notch! Perhaps expanding a little more on the final princess with the fire ball would have been nice, maybe making it that she had cast an invisibility spell on herself, but attacked instead because she was outraged?
However, I'm aware that this story went on a little further than you'd originally intended, so having you expand even *further* seems a little excessive :P Point was though that I absolutely loved it, and really I'm of the opinion that all your stories in the Felerya setting are A+ material. I should work on one myself soon.
Posted by PrinnyDood 11 years ago Report
Thank you! And yeah, this is intended to have taken place after the encounter depicted in Karbo's picture, thus making this one a sequel of sorts.
Rrgh. The formatting must have screwed up when I was copying and pasting this at some point. Fixed now though. xD
Yeah, that's actually rather astute of you, since I had actually intended the Fireball Princess to have used magic to conceal herself initially, but then couldn't come up with a smooth way to covey that to the reader, so I just left it to imagination how exactly she went undetected at first.
And yes, you should definitely do more Felarya-based stories, I find it to be an extremely rich and inspiring setting . . . and also easy to engineer gratuitous vore scenarios in, which is a pretty big bonus too. x3
Posted by anais2000 11 years ago Report
Well, as I said... Everything is better with princesses.
You know, I'd like to have Moanna's claim verified. ;)
Posted by PrinnyDood 11 years ago Report
Yep, you were 100% spot on with your prediction: princesses make just about everything better! :3
Posted by IceCreamStand 9 years ago Report
Ah, lovely. A truly excellent tale, Prinny. As always!
Posted by PrinnyDood 9 years ago Report
Holy shit you're still alive! I thought you'd vanished from the vore scene forever. Glad to see you're still around. :D
Anyway, thanks! I've always rather had a weakness for dragons and maidens of all varieties doing their classic thing together. :3
Posted by IceCreamStand 9 years ago Report
Yes indeed! I'm mostly in the chat room these days. I have a school setting I'm running called Primrose Academy, where predators and prey attend high school together. I keep thinking I should post some of the logs as a story, since some of the scenes are really good.
Posted by PrinnyDood 9 years ago Report
I see. I'm mostly too intimidated by real-time conversations to use the chat-rooms much, but it's still great that you're hanging around these parts yet.
High School of the Vore, eh? Sounds like a lovely place. And I've always had a soft spot for roleplay logs . . . some of the earliest stuff I've read in this 'genre' was adapted RP logs, so I'd certainly have no objections if you posted up some of your favorites. :3
Posted by Philosoraptor 5 years ago Report
Another one of your great "dragon-eating princess/maiden" stories I seemed to have somehow missed. I have to imagine the dragon-girl being a bit more 'dragonish' and less 'anime-style giant flying girl' to make it seem more sensible, but fortunately this doesn't seem to change it at all. Thanks for sharing as always!
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Thanks! That is one of the great things about prose - there's often a great deal of wiggle-room in terms of how the reader imagines things.
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 4 years ago Report
I am pritty sure that the phrase "Eternal Youth hotspring" and "All you can eat buffet" mean the same thing when translated into Draconic
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report
Indeed! It's one of the reasons you see dragons showing up to Eternal Youth Hotsprings so very often! x3
Those ladies might not get to enjoy their eternal youth for very long, but at least they'll have technically gotten that oh-so-coveted prize. ;P