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Mass Effect vore story.

Tali/KasumiOCs

Been putting this on and off over the months, until I finally managed to complete it. Had to skip on some contents to make it work.

On that note, this is the final part of this storyline. Maybe in the future I might revisit her future quests (Might wonder how with most of the cast having gone down Tali's gullet, but I'll make it work if that time comes)

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SmaxTheDestroyer

Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 10 years ago Report

Awesome ending to an awesome series!

Vir

Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report

Thank you.

iwillnomu

Posted by iwillnomu 10 years ago Report

Great to see you finished this storyline, I've really enjoyed the Removing Competition stories

Resileaf

Posted by Resileaf 10 years ago Report

Well that was a fine ending for a fine series! Good work closing it, ending something can be pretty hard!

Vir

Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report

Indeed, but in this case it was the beginning (of this part) that was most problematic.

Kiala_Tiagra

Posted by Kiala_Tiagra 10 years ago Report

go with the krogan as a prey, i been dying to know how that would work XD

Vir

Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report

Wouldn't be much different from other prey to be honest.

Kiala_Tiagra

Posted by Kiala_Tiagra 10 years ago Report

i mean imagine if she is sent to assasinate a pervy krogan warlord, she went in disguised as a prostitute and in the middle of sex tali gobbled him up, i imagine the krogan will fight more fiercely to try to escape tali's belly even though he will still fail

Vir

Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report

If I ever did a scene with a krogan, I certainly would not include sex.

Kiala_Tiagra

Posted by Kiala_Tiagra 10 years ago Report

ok, that's fine by me

Kiala_Tiagra

Posted by Kiala_Tiagra 10 years ago Report

if i have to say my feelings for the story, even though it's a good ending all in all, i feel sad for the normandy crew, all of their remains are probably in the ship's septic tank compacted together until the alliance arrives

or maybe the ship just dump it all to dark space. All shep, garrus, javik, and the other crew's are all floating in outer space. A bit sad really

anyways good story

Blahblahbum

Posted by Blahblahbum 10 years ago Report

That. Was. Awesome! I cannot wait to see what you write next. Will there be any more stories told of the Mass Effect Universe?

Vir

Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report

Maybe. Eventually.

banzai

Posted by banzai 10 years ago Report

As always you really know how to describe the vore and post vore process very nicely :) I love those images of Tali with a large squirming belly under that tight outfit.

Vir

Posted by Vir 10 years ago Report

Thank you. :)

darkpd

Posted by darkpd 10 years ago Report

aw i was hoping more quarians females would be eaten maybe in future stories i hope but any way great stories

Blahblahbum

Posted by Blahblahbum 9 years ago Report

An amazing end to an amazing series, I would love to see a future series featuring the Quarians as the dominant race of the galaxy and they mass-breed Asari for food. Casual vore is always good vore.

Predaking54

Posted by Predaking54 8 years ago Report

Will her aunt gulp her down ever?!?! Please!?... But maybe non fatal ... Hehehe like maybe UB or AV?? Or they can take turns swallowing each other but with Tali now strong enough to upchuck her prey willingly?

SuperheroFood

Posted by SuperheroFood 7 years ago Report

Brilliant end to an awesome series.

StygianSkies

Posted by StygianSkies 7 years ago Report

Good lord this story hit all my sweet spots in just the right ways, can't believe I just now found it. Mass vore is something that's rare enough on its own, but combined with callous betrayal of friends and loved ones just for hedonistic pleasure and/or the simple desire to wallow in the sadistic domination of having others perish at one's whims is a recipe for perfection. I absolutely loved the length, pacing, dialogue, descriptions of both the action and disposal, and pretty much every other aspect of the story. 10/10, will be reading through the entirety of your gallery in the next few days.

StygianSkies

Posted by StygianSkies 3 years ago Report

Came back to this after playing Legendary Edition, hit a lot harder with more knowledge and intimacy towards all the characters.

Totally coincidentally found my own Shepard romantically drawn towards Tali. She's a great gal, and seeing her lose herself to desires like this is a thing to behold. Thanks again for the fantastic fic

Blahblahbum

Posted by Blahblahbum 6 years ago Report

Will you ever revisit this series? Maybe with Tali devouring Matriarch Benezia or Morinith? I would love to see those lovely blue ladies add themselves to Tali's voluptuous curves.

TheSilentKing

Posted by TheSilentKing 7 months ago Report

Pretty good story, I'd love to see alt endings where Daro'Xen or Shala'Raan eat Tali tho