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Enough business, time for pleasure! Julia decides to have Sam and Lexi test out a viewer suggestion.
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This one was a little weird. Well, weirder than usual. I think the lack of sleep is getting to me.
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Posted by Jones 10 years ago Report
That was amazing. Not only everything I hoped for when you got around to this chapter, but even some stuff I've never thought of before. I admit I was curious leading up to this to see how you would make it work in the HDTF universe, but you didn't disappoint, and Lexi's method of removing Sam was quite the amazing scene in my head.
Like was said in the comments of HDTF 11 Part 1, this is easily my favorite series on Aryion. Well done. The shorts you've been writing are also fantastic. As usual, keep up the great work, and I'm excited to see where you take this going forward.
P.S. - I wonder after the breast vore one you wrote for this series, with the psuedo liquification, if we'll ever see a pair of people get trapped as someone's new chest enhancements/breast "implants". Just some more random ideas from the peanut gallery ;)
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
I'm happy you liked it! As for the "Trapped as implants" subject, it might be interesting to do a few stories where the HDTF "falls into the wrong hands" so to speak.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 10 years ago Report
Loved this! Especially loved Julia's casual loan of her boyfriend/toy, and how she's keeping him. And Marsha. It's immensely sexy to me that they can wrap up humans and nest them in one another like this, with no one on the outside being able to tell.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
I agree. There's something really kinky to me about someone disappearing inside another person without a trace.
Posted by Jones 10 years ago Report
^^ ditto ^^
Posted by Vitric 10 years ago Report
I still love this. Usually my interest falls out on long series like this, but you manage to make every story have the same amount of heart put in to it. They don't feel "rushed" or that you're doing it simply for the sake of doing it and not because you enjoy it. Keep up the good work!
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
I'll try my best to keep it rolling. I'm certainly getting no shortage of ideas from you folk. I think part of the staying power comes from the fact that there's very little overarching plot. Just a bunch of people trying out new kinks.
Posted by Peterdens 10 years ago Report
i love it but i wonder how they will get around the not being able to see part! =)
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
I'll work on it. There's no problem that some good old fashioned technobabble can't fix!
Posted by cartooncrazed13 10 years ago Report
Is it possible in the HDTF universe for one of the girls to seperate her head from her body, eat herself out, and then unbirth her head?
or possibly a girl version of the auto-fellatio where instead of sucking her penis into her stomach, she starts sucking her body into her vagina?
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
I put some thought into the disembodiment thing and I think I've come up with suitable technobabble to justify it. As for the girl version of auto-fellatio (auto-cunnilingus), sure, why not?
Posted by cartooncrazed13 10 years ago Report
cool