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The fresh new portable HDTF allows Julia to run a public test of the HDTF, seeing if Carla can prove that the HDTF might possibly have a place in normal society. It is not without mishap.
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This exists as proof that I'm scraping the bottom of my writing barrel. It took me weeks to get this thing written. You might not see much more from me.
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Posted by Resileaf 10 years ago Report
It's a shame, but I understand you're losing your motivation to write. ^-^ Thank you for having written so much quality content, though! We appreciate it a lot!
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
With any luck it'll come charging back, but if not, I'm not going to leave everyone hanging. There should be an epilogue for the Meeta stories, and there are at least two more functions of the HDTF to add.
Posted by PokèLord 10 years ago Report
As a popular Pokemon fanfic writer, I understand what you're going through. You lose your motivation to your work. You lose your interest in what you write about. You'll find what you need to in the near future. (P.S. I keep my identity a secret on tthis site to protect my reputation)
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Whew. Good to know I'm not malfunctioning.
Posted by PokèLord 10 years ago Report
Trust me, you're just a writer. I know what writers are like. :)
Posted by Groblek 10 years ago Report
Very nice! I particularly enjoyed the double-unbirthing and shenanigans inside Carla's womb.
Good luck managing the writer's burnout. There's a reason I often go months (and on occasion, years, though hopefully not that anymore), between stories. I would run out of steam. I've found that going and reading other types of stories - anything I enjoy reading, not just porn, helps me recharge. Lately, writing some stories with the intent to sell them has actually helped me be more motivated to write in general. I hope you can find whatever it is that restores your own well of inspiration - we'll be here when you do.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thanks. I'm literally about to load a dozen indie novels onto my kindle. Hopefully it tosses some logs onto the creative fire.
Posted by SuntMan 10 years ago Report
You are almost too good at writing this stuff, I believe that you'll think of something in good time, no need to force it.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm really glad you like my stuff. Hopefully You're right. We'll see what comes out of me next.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 10 years ago Report
Oh my! They may have to call a plumber! Or... perhaps they'll just use a plunger to solve the problem. Beautifully done.
The acts of lovemaking inside are a fantasy of mine in particular as well. I would love to be slurped up together with my lover like that.
We haven't seen much of Carla being dominant up to this point, at least, not in this length or detail. Seems she has some tendencies in common with her old mistress, Marsha, when she's allowed to be on top. Though she didn't take it to the point of actual meanness except with someone she had cause to dislike. Very interesting. I'm guessing she's going to get a lecture...
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thanks! You're the reason I decided to finally put some "on camera" flushing.
Carla was sort of intended to be the one who was sort of a switch, dominant over Lana and submissive to Marsha.
Posted by Peterdens 10 years ago Report
you can add side affects like Sam and Lexi regress to babies inside Carla!
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
I certainly could. Age regression isn't one of my kinks, but there's no reason you couldn't technobabble that into the HDTF's operation.
Posted by Peterdens 10 years ago Report
well thats was kinda the points that u could add stuff u dont really want as side effects that they want to work out of the HDTFs
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Excellent point.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 10 years ago Report
If you have to take a break, take a break. Sometimes it's necessary for creativity to come back. Read some good books, watch some movies, enjoy life.
I hadn't read any of the prior stories in this series, but I quite enjoyed this one. Good work!
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thanks! Yeah, the HDTF stories don't have a really strong plot through them, so picking up along the way is easy, so long as you can quickly grip the concept of "the HDTF facilitates and enhances vore."
Posted by Throat_Wolf 10 years ago Report
Yeah. You know, sometimes I think one of the most fun things about vore stories is seeing what different mechanisms various authors come up with to make it physically possible. They can range from never explaining it at all, to coming up with an entirely different (and whimsical) system of biology (as in the Aekallia stories). My own Neko Campus 'verse is somewhere in the middle there. Just when I think I've seen it all, someone comes up with something utterly new and novel. Like your story here.
I must admit, I'm rather curious to know what happens to Stephanie after she goes down'a hooooole. I'll bet after Carla had that idea, she was "flushed with pride." :)
And for that matter, what happens to Sam. I suppose I should go back and read the earlier stories to get some ideas. :)
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Yeah, solving the vore problems is fun. I've got magic in the "Size isn't a Big Deal" stories, technology in the HDTF, and glossed over in the Quickies.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 10 years ago Report
Having read the whole series...wow, so many possibilities. I would think it shouldn't be too long before they have to deal with companies sniffing around making offers, industrial espionage, law enforcement and intelligence agencies wanting to get their hands on it...not to mention Science Kink fans tracking down their location and demanding in on the show. (If they start catching spies, they might just end up HDTFing them and sticking them in bottles or something just to keep them out of the way...)
What if the crew ran a contest where the winner got to be HDTFed? (They show up at his house and do something unusual to him with an HDTF on location so they can take him back to their secret shooting location without him knowing the way...)
What if one of the crew borrows a portable HDTF and goes looking for revenge on people (like Stephanie)?
What if a supervillain built a giant HDTF big enough to cover the entire city?
What if, once they have a portable HDTF with a long-duration battery, they send someone on a world tour by mail with it, like the garden gnome in Amelie?
How about complete physical mergence and/or assimilation? (After you've got an "undo" function, of course.)
So many ideas...
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Excellent ideas, all around! The merge in particular is one of the reasons I'm intrigued by but have not revisited the "melting" function and Lexi's insistence that "we have to do this together."
Posted by ShadesofBlack 10 years ago Report
Oooh, I really like the contest idea!
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Wow. I forgot all about these ideas.