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A busty woman gives a man a very, VERY deep hug.
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Originally seen on my blog last night... or rather, this morning. This one has been cleaned up to be less obviously the result of sleep deprivation.
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Posted by ninth 9 years ago Report
Good stuff man, keep it up!
You have any longer pieces in progress?
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks! I might be able to do the next chapter of Size isn't a Big Deal soon. Just need the ideas and the time. Which... I guess is always the case.
Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report
Very nice! Just disappearing into a woman's cleavage is an interesting twist. I liked the touch with him running into another captive in there, though I'd have enjoyed seeing them interact a bit.
This could be quite a bit of fun to see expanded a bit into a longer story - possibly a scene at a party where the woman goes off somewhere private with a guest, and returns alone more than once.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I've got to agree that this would have been a lot better with a bit more flow and detail, but lately I haven't had the time to devote to something deeper. Hopefully that changes this weekend.
Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report
I understand how that goes, I just got through a period of free time myself and will be cutting back my writing some until time allows. Best of luck finding time.
Posted by soline 9 years ago Report
Wonderful story :D
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I'm very happy you like it!
Posted by nauczyciel 9 years ago Report
I loved it, being tucked away forever is my favorite ending
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
Posted by dragon32078 9 years ago Report
I really liked the story as well. I would love it if you would create a series based on these characters. Especially if you showed how he plays with the 'victims' once they are trapped inside her breast. Just like others have said a longer story, though harder to write, would be appreciated.
The parts I loved were:
1. When she hugged him at first.
2. When she started to force his head towards her breasts.
3. When he looked up at her eyes.
4. When he found his breast mate.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I'm happy you liked it. I think maybe doing a prequel and a sequel might be fun. Show how the other person got in there and then show what sort of shenanigans they get up to.
Posted by dragon32078 9 years ago Report
Thank you for creating both the sequel and prequel in one fell swoop.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I'm very efficient.