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This is (in part) a Milly story. At last. I think the last time she appeared in one of my stories was more than eight months ago.
After so long, you may not have the "recent" events of this storyline in mind any more. So, if you want to go back and check on anything, this story picks up on events where Stories 120, 125 and 128 left off.
Dramatis personae:
Tarynn belongs to SimonLorimer.
Malika belongs to turboman500.
Anna, Crisis and the world of Felarya itself belong to Karbo.
SPOILER! If you're wondering by the end of having read it, yes, this story does mark the end of the road for several of my established characters. So it wasn't easy to write, as you can imagine… But I'd decided on this quite some time ago.
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Posted by Bags 10 years ago Report
I'm about to read it. And I saw your comments. Are you serious about ending the road for some of your characters? :(
Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report
Yes. For reasons that I can go into after, if you like.
Posted by Bags 10 years ago Report
Yes please! But I'm happy you didn't kill off Milly, Are you ending the story for her too?
Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report
No, no! We'll definitely be seeing Milly again. She's my main Felaryan character.
We won't see Roshan again, though. I felt that his storyline with Jissy had come to a natural end. He's got her home to Felarya safely, and he's seen her start her own family. She's so worried for his safety that at some point the need to send him away became inevitable.
And we almost certainly won't see Joanna again. (She definitely won't see Tina and Milly again.) She's one of my favourite characters, so this was quite difficult to write. I hadn't initially intended this. But when the three tomthumbs got kidnapped, I realised that having them all get back safely to Milly would be an anti-climactic "back to normality" cop-out. So I decided to permanently sacrifice Joanna.
Posted by VonMori 10 years ago Report
Pretty sure Calina and Vuni just got digested
Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report
What makes you think that?
Posted by VonMori 10 years ago Report
Your brief description of the neko Tarynn ate matches Calina,and after that just general suspicion, pretty sure a couple of other minor characters also got nommed. Sorry, just a natural cynic here.
Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report
Calina has dark black skin. The neko Tarynn ate was simply described as "sun-tanned". It wasn't her. She may well end up eaten some day, but not today.
Likewise, the description of the slug-girls doesn't match Vuni. She's still alive for now.
Posted by VonMori 10 years ago Report
Sorry, my paranoia's acting up, also it's what I'd do if killing a character off quietly.
Posted by Random74 10 years ago Report
So sad, but was a wonderful read.
Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report
Thank you!