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WARNING! WARNING! This story is… a bit different from what I usually write. Though I'm primarily a vorarephile, I've recently surprised myself by discovering a (much milder and occasional) interest in other types of erotic fantasy. Some of which I delve into here.
You've been warned: Even my regular readers may find some of this disturbing or disconcerting. (It does also include vore, however.)
It's pretty much pure, unashamed fetish fuel.
Edit: There's a continuation (non-vore) here: http://aryion.com/g4/view/302503 .
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Posted by 4ofSwords 10 years ago Report
Very interesting and imaginative! I spent the last half of the story wondering if there was going to be some trick here, if there wasn't going to be a final scene with Emma, if it had become something more than a simulation.
You do an excellent job of putting in enough detail that we can really get any sense we want. The first scene was genuinely frightening.
Well done!
Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report
Thank you! I actually half-hoped readers might wonder whether there might be a trick in the third simulation there. Since Adam didn't know what was happening, and was fully helpless and trusting. But no; Out of Your Mind wants its customers to keep coming back and spending. ;)
Posted by mach-one 9 years ago Report
That was certainly good - not only was the plot interesting, but I really liked the delivery. It was a great read, I mean, I enjoy your work but it's clearly fetish oriented, that being the main reason I read it.
After reading you for years I've gotten to know your style, tropes and the usual structure of your stories and as you've said, this is not your typical work - as far as plot and how the story evolves it's been a favourite of mine. You don't know what the heck is going to happen at the beggining and the story is intriguing until the end of the second simulation when you get the hang of it. Then I expected Emma to eat the guy for real but was surprised to encounter both a new character and the fact that it was in fact still a fantasy. Sandy existing for real and what she says is another nice twist. So yeah, you definetely get the thumbs up from me! ;)
Outside of that, it was also interesting to get a glimpse at other fantasies you have. Other than vore, i also (on a lesser extent) deviate from the usual scenario. Sometimes i'm into the typical, non-vore giantess stuff, or just plain female domination. While my biggest fetish is F/whatever unwilling or unsure prey vore with digestion I tend to also find lack of control erotic. That has taken me to fantasies of male preds eating me or eating girls (to which i'm attracted to), my point of view being in a similar fashion to what the beggining of your story was or situations in which i'm an unwilling victim in general. Also, I like when the pred turns into prey by some other predator. Lately i've discovered i also have interest in taking (mild by comparison) dominating roles myself. Interestingly, i'm rarley attracted to non-humanoid predators or non sentient ones and even less commonly aroused by being the predator though i've thought about it in very few occasions.
Posted by French_snack 9 years ago Report
Thanks. I'm glad if I was able to sustain the unexpected throughout!
I know what you mean about your other fantasies being related in some way to the core impulses of your vore fantasies. It's all linked - even the fact of being drawn to the *opposite* of what we might normally like.
My other fantasies are more occasional, "on-and-off", compared to how I feel about vore. Female fatal peril is an occasional strong one (drowning, guillotine and hanging are all things I've discovered an interest for on dA in recent months), including me imaging myself as being the fatally endangered (or cheerfully suicidal!) damsel. And yes, they're definitely a type of "lack of control" situation.
Posted by mach-one 9 years ago Report
From a non-erotic point of view it was the story I most enjoyed from you though it's ending was great too from an erotic point of view though i was kinda left longing for Emma (i have a thing for redheads, specially petite, casual, humorous ones).
I really identify with that. The fetish for attractive females perishing (in a non-vore scenario) is something i hadn't heard of, even if I find fetishes in general an interesting phenomenon but i'm certainly going to give it a look even if it's for the shock factor. Though, the death of an attractive girl is a thought that I find quite tragical and I sometimes tend to drone thinking about it. Kinda like vore before I eventually started to sexualize consumption but i'm not sure if it could turn into a fetish, in a near future at least.
Something interesting is that I find we have very similar tastes in vore, from the details we're fixed about to even the vocabulary and tone we like to hear from a predator so i guess it's not that surprising that we deviate from vore in similar ways.
Posted by French_snack 9 years ago Report
It looks that way, yes. :)
If you're interested in what voluntary hanging can look like from a fantasy / fetish perspective, I recently discovered SusanCoquin's work on deviantArt.
Examples:
* partly hesitant, thrill-seeking in "Rose Noire": http://susancoquin.deviantart.com/gallery/53945666/Rose-Noire ;
* not hesitant at all, cheerful and excited at hanging themselves in "Noose Angels": http://susancoquin.deviantart.com/gallery/50379344/Noose-Angels .
Sometimes it doesn't do much for me; sometimes it's a turn-on (though not to the same extent as vore). Depends on my mood.
Posted by mach-one 9 years ago Report
Wow, that was seriously dark. I enjoyed Rose Noire for the horror factor alone.
Noose angels wasn't the same as it's much more fetish oriented - it reminds me, in fact, to the Vore Restaurant stories or your own IVC. Though, my reaction was interesting as it did shock me while I can think of someone unwillingly eaten and digested alive and either not care too much or get all excited about it, it is kinda ironical xD
Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report
I definitely wouldn’t mind Emma becoming a snack!
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
I don't think she has vore fantasies herself, but a simulation of her could certainly be programmed into a vore scenario. For a customer to enjoy watching her be gobbled up.
Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report
I’m still down. Especially if he’s the pred next time >;-3
Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report
It would also be nice if she turn out to be one the ticklish side if ya know what I mean. They always squirm much better when the prey is ticklish!!! >:D
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
That's a good point! :)
Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report
IKR!