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During a major recruitment effort, it seems the HDTF team may have trouble on the horizon.
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Many of you fine readers have made requests and suggested some fun ideas. I've decided to use a bunch of them and try to do an HDTF plot that's a little deeper than usual. We'll see how that goes.
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Posted by Jones 10 years ago Report
Oooooo... I like where this is headed already. Can't wait to see how deep you go and what you cook up with all of the suggestions everyone has been feeding you. I'll be very interested to see how much more character development goes on amongst the awesome that is the HDTF. Count me in, good Sir.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thanks! It's all pretty vague in my head now, but hopefully I can do a decent job of it.
Posted by Jones 10 years ago Report
Just as Throat_Wolf said below, I too have no doubt whatsoever. You're an excellent writer. Above all else, I hope you simply enjoy exploring your own writing and creativity going forward with this. If it's anywhere near as fun, imaginative, and colorful as what you've done so far, than it'll be great ^_^
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thanks! This is EASILY the most supportive community I've been apart of.
Posted by KrasnyiKoiot 10 years ago Report
Haaa, this was fun. Looking forward to more as ever, Marloweny!
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thanks! Not entirely sure exactly where it's going to go, but hopefully the ideas I've got are entertaining.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 10 years ago Report
Oooooh, this is starting off awesome. I especially like the not-as-secret-as-he-thinks-he-is agent at the end. I can't wait to see where this goes next.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Fingers crossed I can pull off something satisfying.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 10 years ago Report
I have no doubt whatsoever.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Your confidence in me is humbling.
Posted by RLord4268 10 years ago Report
Ooooh hell yes. I cannot wait to see where this goes. I feel like we've all just been spoiled beyond belief with this series. Loved the bottling.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Glad you liked it. Hope my current brain isn't writing checks that my future brain can't cash with this...
Posted by Uryx 10 years ago Report
Oh no! Men in snappy business suits are always trouble D=
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Darn right!
Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 10 years ago Report
Another short but interesting installment with great clouds of drama on the horizon.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Clouds of really bizarre problems and even more bizarre solutions at the very least.
Posted by Drizztt44 10 years ago Report
Baaaaad spy on the case, very bad and not just at his job XD
Loving this little plot twist but does that mean your wrapping it up?! Makes me sad... still love it!
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Not necessarily wrapping it up. Just giving it a story line for a bit. That said, if I DID decide to wrap this up, this story would at least give something satisfying to go out on. (But that's not likely. HDTF is too conducive to little kinky stories to just abandon.)
Posted by Drizztt44 10 years ago Report
Lol I think its genius. A device that bends the laws of physics by introducing the fourth demension to a limited area, you can do almost anything with that thing. Its no wonder some power hungery, white-collared wannabes are trying for this device. It's tantalizing to anyone, unfortunately not just sexually or medically.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 10 years ago Report
And wonderfully, by simply describing one vacuumed into a jar volunteer scene well, and then showing a large number of jars... you've made my mind skip to imagining all those people's entry stories. The way you write a chapter that makes the mind imagine a small book is always great.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thanks! One of the reasons I had Sam ask how the guy wanted to get vacuumed up was to set the mind to imagining the other choices people might have made.
Posted by RLord4268 9 years ago Report
Going back through the series again. If you ever do an epilogue, I think it would be a nice quirk to find carl still in the jar, enjoying himself. Especially since Sam assured him he'd be out in a few hours. Heh heh.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Definitely a good gag.
Posted by Goblingobler 8 years ago Report
What's Julia being punished for? O.O
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
She unbirthed Mark in HDTF 10 (http://aryion.com/g4/view/284005) and left him in there for several days longer than he'd agreed to, not releasing him until HDTF 13 (http://aryion.com/g4/view/293076)