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A hard decision, mounth, vagina or anus... al of them are a good "door".
1º page of a pack of 4.
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Posted by reliuskaiser 9 years ago Report
Never stopped you before.
Posted by Emperor_Palpatine 9 years ago Report
Oh wow! All my faves are updating today! <3
Posted by Drazelleverse 9 years ago Report
Hmmm... Something seems off about her pose in the second panel. Like, the ass and legs are too far left, and it's kind of distracting. And the arm laying on it feels uncomfortably long to me.
HOWEVER! This is a well done comic, and save that SMALL critique I found, everything else looks proportionate and, of course, very sexy. And even then, the proportions on panel two don't need much tweaking. If you could move the ass, legs, and hand to the right about 1/4 to 1/2 an inch, that would look MUCH better.
As always, your work and it's not my place to judge. Just hoping to give some constructive critique and commend you on keeping up with your amazing work. ^^
Posted by Natsumemetalsonic 9 years ago Report
Thanks for the critic, you are right, this was one of my 1º pictures with my new tablet and I did not have total control, and the problem is that this kind of characters, with a giant stomach are hard to draw.
Posted by Drazelleverse 9 years ago Report
Very true. I do completely understand. ^^ Well, hope thing with the tablet get better, and I look forward to seeing more of this comic. ^^
Posted by VorePhiliaGirl 9 years ago Report
Please , Continuos with this! n_n
Posted by Natsumemetalsonic 9 years ago Report
Yes off course.
Posted by B1izzardHawk 9 years ago Report
well she has survive, I mean she was still alive when her daughter was 18
Posted by LittleSlimy 9 years ago Report
You are mistaking. I think. If i remember well.
Posted by B1izzardHawk 9 years ago Report
it was in the description that it was at some point in chapter 2?
Posted by B1izzardHawk 9 years ago Report
it was in the description that it was at some point in chapter 2?
Posted by mouth111 9 years ago Report
Great. Love this series!
Posted by zarpaulus 9 years ago Report
That would be her colon, wouldn't it?
Posted by V 9 years ago Report
It's a trap!
Posted by Naganommer 9 years ago Report
"But you'll digest me..." That one line speaks to me on so many levels. Amazing work as always Natsume.
Posted by Natsumemetalsonic 9 years ago Report
XD
Posted by xUnbirth15x 9 years ago Report
I vote vagina!
Posted by Cypherdirt 9 years ago Report
1 of 4. will we be seeing 1 a day Natsume?
Posted by Natsumemetalsonic 9 years ago Report
I will try, I want upload another one this night, but I´m working in my old laptop in this moment and I cant work in all the pages at the same time, so I go a little more slow because I must work page by page, I dony know if I will have the next one finished today or tomorrow.
Posted by crushxtreame 9 years ago Report
plzzz no digestion
Posted by ublover1 9 years ago Report
Here all are good id pick pussy or assets more though always been a ass man
Posted by Fircracker 9 years ago Report
Wawww,tat anus!! Love the anal vore and digestion!!!
Posted by Draskghellion 9 years ago Report
please, moaaaaaar ! x3
Posted by Buck7098 9 years ago Report
I vote pussy.
Posted by Buck7098 9 years ago Report
I vote pussy.
Posted by NeneNoms 9 years ago Report
yay! it's been so long since we've seen an update on this one! I'd pay to keep it going myself if I had the money XD
Posted by runner 9 years ago Report
Sweet more continuation on a awesome story I hope the sisters don't die
Posted by keyblademark 9 years ago Report
el brazo se me hace un tanto raro en la primera viñeta
Posted by Mukat 9 years ago Report
JUST DO IT.
JUST CRAWL UP HER ASS XD