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During a field trip intended to teach some chauvinistic boys to respect women, three mothers find a device which allows them to finally put men in their place.
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This enormous (20k words) story is the result of two very long commissions. The commissioner was fairly specific in the requirements, which included fatal vore, incest, and strong themes of feminism and female dominance. As a result, this covers material I almost never touch on. If you're a fan of my usual stuff, you might be disturbed by this stuff, so steer clear if you don't like what you see in the tags.
Note: Ages are seldom mentioned, but any sexual activity is between 18+ year olds.
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Posted by joeburp22181 9 years ago Report
Wow... amazing.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks. Don't get too used to this sort of content though. It took FOREVER to write, because I could only write a few pages at a clip before I had to take a break and do something lighter.
Posted by thehungrynaga 9 years ago Report
Brilliantly written piece. Only thing I can think to mention, is that while the characters are good, they're more Misandrist than Feminist. Still an amzing story though.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
You're absolutely right. The original commission description used the word feminist, but it quickly became misandry in order to fulfill his requirements. Unfortunately, lots of people think the word for "women who hate and believe themselves implicitly superior to men" is "feminist."
Posted by GenocideHeart 9 years ago Report
In fairness, today's radical feminism is pretty much misandry coated with a poor paint job to try to pretend to be feminism. When your best slogans are 'kill all white men' and 'I bathe in male tears', you aren't fighting for women's rights anymore, you're just letting out your latent hatred and trying to look righteous while doing it.
Posted by thevorrdudette 9 years ago Report
I'd argue against that. Those slogans are meant to strike back at constant bullshit, basically. It's odd to see people get so upset over those phrases even though absolutely nothing is going to happen to them. Yes, as though we would/could actually kill all white men. They're angry at years of being mistreated and mindsets that people are inevitably born into. The constant denial and cries of "NOT ALL MEN" avoid issues, prove that there is such a thing as collective mind, avoid self-reflection, and avoid bettering of the world. It takes hard, wrenching emotional and physical work through defensive feelings, and clearly the general mindset of the site proves that no one gives a fuck about being better, they just care about feeling better.
It's totally just a bunch of salty bitches, though, of course. Psh.
Posted by GenocideHeart 9 years ago Report
The problem is that blaming WHITE men is pointless. WHITE men aren't the ones living in African and Middle Eastern areas who adhere to asinine laws that contemplate HARD CANING OF WOMEN purely for the 'crime' of WALKING TOO CLOSE TO A MAN and think sewing a girl's parts shut is a-okay.
If you really want to fix injustices, maybe you should sling those slogans at *the people who actually have unjust laws that heavily punish women for ridiculously innocent violations*. And those people generally ain't straight white men from North America and Europe. Just sayin'.
And I'll also add I'm not even white, or straight, or able-bodied, so I sure hope I won't be told to 'check my privilege' or some such nonsense. Though that hasn't stopped SOME social justice advocates from calling me a 'house n****r', 'uncle Tom' or 'race traitor' for being black and not hating white men. Go figure, I detect more hatred from people claiming they fight it than from the supposed evil whites...
I'll stop at that, because this isn't the right place for this discussion, but suffice it to say I am heavily disillusioned with modern feminism, social justice and all that entails. The fact I am a misanthrope and have low expectations for humans in general doesn't help any.
Posted by thevorrdudette 9 years ago Report
Tbh you're not going to change my mind and I'm not going to change yours so let's drop it and be done. There's literally nothing you can say that will convince me out of what I learned and nothing I can say that will bring anything into yours either. This conversation is pointless and should be dropped.
Posted by thevorrdudette 9 years ago Report
The only thing I actually have to say is that the actual statistics on rape and abuse are higher in the U.S. than any of those places you mentioned. "Saving the poor colored women from the evil colored men" has been used for a very long time as a colonizing tool by the U.S. and looking at the American track record, I'm not buying into that old and propaganda-riddled idea. Sorry. Again, there's nothing actually useful that will come out of this so I'm not sure why I'm responding with this. Whatever, man, just whatever.
Posted by lakai 9 years ago Report
Would you be open to doing this sort of commission again and if so, for how much? (I mean, the length--not the theme.)
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Possibly. You can PM me about it, but if I can, be prepared for a LONG wait. I never know when I'll have time for big projects like this.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
It's not usually my thing, but I'm glad you liked it.
Posted by Chaos 9 years ago Report
I can't believe I missed this story, its amazing, the detail, the characters, the MILFs. I love it, great job.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by thevorrdudette 9 years ago Report
Kinda...disgusting.
As though I'd actually kill a man or do things that men like to fetishize happening to them...? Um. No.
This is...kinda the site's general attitude towards women though, I suppose. It's a good sign of collective mentality among groups with power. Joy.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I'm sorry you didn't like the story. If it's any consolation, the subject matter was dictated by the commissioner and is quite different from my personal views. If you were to look at my other stories i think you'd find a much different tone.
Posted by thevorrdudette 9 years ago Report
Alright...it's just something I see pervading a lot of stuff on the site, you know...?
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I understand. It's never fun to see something twisted to suit someone else's purposes and views.