Posted by bighead 9 years ago Report

Amazing work as usual, and definitely a fitting use for Meeta, I'd say.

Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report

Glad you liked it!

Posted by ShadesofBlack 9 years ago Report

Loved it! The propensity for use in dom-sub play is one of the things I love about vore. Beautiful.

Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report

Well, it's certainly an area where someone's on top and someone's on (or in) the bottom.

Posted by Amberain 9 years ago Report

Hmm, this seems like it's just the beginning of something bigger. I do hope I'm right. The HDTF series is going well, but I've missed this group.

Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report

Thanks! It's funny. I was like "I'll just do one more, since there was a request." I even gave it a pun title that implied it might be the very last one... but then I went and had Tammer wander off, exhausted, to a very dangerous place... Gosh darn dangling plot threads.

Incidentally, I tried to make sure, despite this little dose of dominance, that Wendy's and Meeta's relationship remained one of genuine affection. I hope I succeeded.

Posted by Amberain 9 years ago Report

It's not just Tammer, though it would be interesting to see how that trip goes. When this chapter started, the transformations from the end of the last installment were suddenly undone, so what happened between the two seems like an untold story as well. Meeta didn't really interact much here, the story is very much focused on Wendy. It ends with her putting Meeta into a position that she can't escape from. I'm having trouble explaining it, but when you add all this up, it doesn't feel like a conclusion to me, it feels more like the beginning of a second story arc. At the very least, if Tammer makes it back home without any help, it would be nice to see what happens between the three of them then.

Posted by Amberain 9 years ago Report

For some reason, it feels more likely though that Wendy will receive some sort of message that Tammer is in trouble, and set off to go help him.

Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report

The story has always been more about Wendy and Meeta than Tammer. And it would certainly be a lot of fun for Wendy to impulsively take Meeta unwittingly and unwillingly on a new adventure.

Posted by Amberain 9 years ago Report

If you ever have inspiration for it, I would definitely read another series about their travels, though I don't think Tammer should be left out entirely. I also still wonder if Nectica might ever be able to change her ways, and become an equal member of the group. The two pairings Wendy/Nectica and Meeta/Tammer always made sense to me, though none of them would be exclusive.

Personally, I couldn't write it, but I think an interesting plot hook would be if Tammer sent a letter back home explaining that he'll be gone longer than expected. Malivia has gone back to the deep realms, but Nectica had second thoughts, and asked Tammer for help to change her ways. If I know Tammer's character, he would agree and they could set off to find some sort of magic item or spell that would allow her to overcome her instinctual tendency towards evil. Meeta might think it's a trick, and Wendy wouldn't want to sit idle that long, so when they got the letter, they would set out to find him.

Just a thought. As I've said, I hope inspiration strikes you, and you return to this group eventually, but if you don't feel it, then there's no point. We'll just have to give it time and see what happens.

Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report

If you think about it, the Nectica/Wendy and Meeta/Tammer pairings do make the most sense. I don't know, you might be on to something here.