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Featuring the mighty Ms Richter http://aryion.com/g4/view/307124
A foolish girl tries to steal from the woman renting her out.
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I tried to sleep, but I just couldn't get this idea out of my head, so I decided I'd try to flex the writer in me. I haven't written anything formally in quite a while, so I apologize if it's not quite up to par.
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Posted by Fabhar 9 years ago Report
Absolutely lovely! Personally, I'm a fan of stomach onomatopoeia - gurgling, that sort of thing - but I can understand why it wouldn't be present in this story. Regardless, I loved this to bits. Seems you're a good writer AND a good artist!
Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report
Amazing job... Can you please draw the scene where she's on the bed drinking the wine, possibly with an internal view?
Posted by Savagerush012 9 years ago Report
I very much like this dragon woman of yours.
Posted by DelectableDeviant 9 years ago Report
I'm truly glad that you decided to write out the story, it came out really good <3 I can't wait to see Ms Richter's future adventures!
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Great stuff! And very original, too!