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Rainbow Dash needs a quick pick me up to restore her energy. Roseluck is happy to oblige!
Part of a series of shorts set in a version of Equestria where ponies commonly eat and fatally digest eachother.
this story was directly inspired by a little comic by Skylark. Go check it out!
can also be found on FimFiction!
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Posted by GrinningCheshire 9 years ago Report
Oh, I like this! I love this sort of casual, fatal vore. What really sells this for me is the dialogue, with Roseluck being so casual about her new purpose as a meal for Rainbow.
It's a short tale, so there isn't a lot for me to comment on. Still, I really liked it. I can't wait to see more!
Also, best of luck on Fimfiction. They... Aren't quite accepting of our fetish yet.
Posted by Bliss 9 years ago Report
No, but I'm making inroads! This is my 5th vore fic on fimfiction.
Posted by GrinningCheshire 9 years ago Report
*Salutes* Onward, my brave comrade in perversion!
Posted by Nebbie 9 years ago Report
The name "vorequestria" is a little overused, and the last story I saw had a completely non-fatal reformation concept for it.
I would recommend something to distinguish it.
Posted by Bliss 9 years ago Report
I know the vorequestria name is already overdone here, but it's the first story with that name on fimfiction, which is the primary place I have in mind when writing.
And I already have another series of vore stories with digestion/reformation, so this would be way too similar to the last one if it had reformation.
Posted by silverspec 9 years ago Report
Great story. I feel you captured RD's personality well if she were a pony-gulping predator. Haha
I really love short and sweet stories like this that detail willing digestion ends.
Thanks!
Posted by Bliss 9 years ago Report
Glad you liked it!
Posted by AthleticDashie 9 years ago Report
I'm shocked that This one is a Willing
Posted by HowlaWolf 9 years ago Report
Willing Prey exists :3
Posted by AthleticDashie 9 years ago Report
Ah I see
Posted by Twisty22 9 years ago Report
Super cute little story, love willing stuff
Posted by angrytiger12 9 years ago Report
okay this is the second time Ive read this one, Classroom demonstration is still my favorite of the three of this series but i realy cant wait for then next one in the series lol all of them have something in them i love i wont list them cause i will sound like a raving foaming at the mouth fanboy and no one likes them, (insert dude from the Avatar cartoon here) lol
Cant wait for the next one.