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Unwilling to pay their own way to make a Florida trip for spring break, ten girls blackmail a fellow student to smuggle them south on her motorcycle.
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This was a suggestion from dickraymond. It features loads of different types of vore, but is pretty light on details. Very grab and gulp.
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Posted by SuperSpaceZone 9 years ago Report
The vore scenes were honestly an okay length for a concept like this! I enjoyed it.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks! I strive to be enjoyable!
Posted by SSJBura 9 years ago Report
That was pretty much perfect really. Seriously. I also loved that it was called stuffing rather than vote for some reason in this case. Finally, really enjoyed the premise too!!!
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I'm really glad you liked it!
Posted by dickraymond 9 years ago Report
This worked really, really well. I'm so glad I suggested it!
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Excellent. As long as I hit the mark.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 9 years ago Report
Oh very nice!
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Tsubasa17 9 years ago Report
Oh please do more like this, please! This was just too good not to do more involving Brandine and the blackmail sorority
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
My stuff tends to turn into a series, so you'll probably see more one day.
Posted by Tsubasa17 9 years ago Report
One day, more? Well, I will not live until that day.
Hehehe, references are fun
Posted by Uryx 9 years ago Report
Your count is off by one, she ended up stuffing 11 girls into her, and extra one appeared to fill her second breast (because you were apparently down to six remaining after the fifth girl went in)
That said, I have no complaints at all, that was fantastic, I loved it <3
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I KNEW I'd screw that up. Never do math while you should be sleeping.
Posted by Uryx 9 years ago Report
Well, it doesn't bother me or anything, just thought I'd point it out. The more the sexier I say!
Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report
More please, have her become a sort of escort service similar to the transporter, no questions asked and any package, so cool if she had to smuggle princesses or mob bosses daughters across borders while being hunted by an all woman task force...
Posted by Uryx 9 years ago Report
That sounds great, but maybe you could write it rather than asking someone else to do it for you =P
Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report
It's his character set that gave me the idea so I should tell him right or should I not share the idea? Besides I have to much stuff to occupy myself right now with college engineering...
Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 9 years ago Report
While I do prefer longer more detailed entries this was still an enjoyable read, good to see you branching out more into mass vore.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks! A little excess sometimes is good for everybody.
Posted by Aril_Lisidmuthir 9 years ago Report
I can see two outcomes of this. Either Maye, upset at being treat "so unfairly" or because she's stuck-up and the sort to throw people under the rug for her own benefit, decides to do a public screening of the video anyway, or...
Brandine: Multi-Vore Queen meets Brandon: Multi-Vore King
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Both are entirely possible!
Posted by mallowsal 9 years ago Report
would like to see a guy with the same abilities too. always wanted to read or see male nipple vore XDXD
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I tend not to write male preds for some reason. I guess because I'm not that into guess, and this is a kink after all. I'll try to throw one or two into future writings.
Posted by mallowsal 9 years ago Report
yay! heck maybe the male and this pred fuse together. become a true herm pred XDXD
Posted by Arkron 9 years ago Report
Dang, it, Marloweny. I've read your one-shots 'The Special', 'The Pyramid Routine', and this one, now I simply cannot read any of your other one-shots. Because the stories are quite amazing and keep wanting to see a continuation of the stories here, but then I remember they're one-shots and that depresses me. :P
Other than that, awesome works, dude. :D
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Just because they start as one-shots doesn't mean they say that way. Basically, everything but HDTF was initially supposed to be a one off that I just got more ideas for.
Posted by Adseria 8 years ago Report
I think I just spotted a mistake.
Mouth (1), nose (2), ears (4), breasts (6), cleavage (7), navel (8), vagina (9), ass (10) and bodysuit (11).
"There was no real sign that ten girls had been stuffed away in that suit with her."
There were 11 (plus Brandine) in the suit, not 10.
I know it's an old piece, but it's just gonna keep bothering me if I don't point it out. Besides, I'm not gonna deny that I have an ulterior motive; It's a great story. It would be a shame if it didn't get a sequel! ;)
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Obviously the complex process of "counting" eludes me.
Posted by Adseria 8 years ago Report
I think it eludes everyone occasionally.