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A brand new product from your friends at Maxi-Chem!
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I'm kind of still out of commission right now. We're buried here at the day job. But I've been making appearances via my phone in stolen moments, and discovered with great effort you can actually post something WRITTEN on your phone WITH your phone. So here we are, a sneak peek of a sort of gag commercial I'll be slapping at the beginning of the final HDTF Hostile Takeover chapter, assuming I ever finish it.
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Posted by DRayElliott 9 years ago Report
I sincerely hope that the final hostile chapter isn't the last chapter period. It'd be a shame to see it all come to an end since there's still so many possibilities.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
As long as I keep writing stories in general, HDTF stories will show up. They're handy for short explorations of different kinks.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 9 years ago Report
Wow, and then when/if he finds another lover, his original will STILL be with him. On his second lover's finger. Somewhere inside herself. As a ring on... eep, that's scary and sexy at the same time!
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
If he turns out to be particularly fickle (or finds a sequence of ladies to turn out to be) then it could certainly turn into quite a secure hiding place for the early ones.
And one wonders what the equal but opposite exchange would be. What configuration would one use to present a former boyfriend to a new one.
Posted by SSJBura 9 years ago Report
Definitely a Maxi-Chem style product. I dunno if evil is the right word for them but....
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I think "Sociopath Products" would describe them. They completely lack empathy for other people. "I don't understand. Why SHOULDN'T I shove you into your own vagina and give you to my new girlfriend as jewelry?"
Posted by SSJBura 9 years ago Report
There ya go. I like the phrasing there. Still not sure whether they are amoral or immoral though... But definitely no regard for others
Posted by RLord4268 9 years ago Report
I'm salivating, waiting for that last chapter man.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks! Try not to get your hopes TOO far up. Just because it's taking a while doesn't mean I've had a lot of time to make it worth reading.
Posted by Thanatos2k 9 years ago Report
Until the last few lines I was sure it was going to be some kind of cock ring.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
It could have gone that way if I'd been thinking.
Posted by thisgirlroolzz 9 years ago Report
That was interesting and original, I was visualizing what you were saying very well.
I'd love to see a series of drawings that depict the story.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks! Any time I write anything I quietly hope that an artist will feel inspired by it.