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The stirring conclusion of the epic HDTF plot, in which the Mad Science Kink crew finally hatches their plan to defeat Maxi-Chem
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This took way too long. The first two chunks of it will look familiar. I think I'm going to have to lay off big long stories for a while. Also, it gets pretty bizarre, even by my standards. I have a feeling there will have to be an epilogue, because there are some fairly significant things which need to be addressed as the story comes to a close.
A few thanks are in order. The thumbnail is courtesy of Dragga, and the name "Sexi" is thanks to
Throat_Wolf. I've also taken a few suggestions from the story thread (http://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=43657) which is where you should put your requests for what I should write next.
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Posted by Squirelly 9 years ago Report
I feel like this whole thing has been a set up for the Sexi pun. You should take a bow.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Never let it be said I won't go to ridiculous lengths for terrible jokes.
Posted by ninth 9 years ago Report
Holy cow, a major finale! Well done, this was a lot of work.
Good to have some closure too haha.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks! It was one of those projects that just dragged on and on.
Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report
Nice! I like the resolution, and the merging bit was a great twist to use there at the end. I do agree that you've left enough bits dangling to need an epilogue, but this was a nice finish to the set. Also, I expect that assistant will go far at Mad Science Kink, I can only imagine what he'll be able to pull off with a *sane* (mostly) boss.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
The assistant is one of those characters who sort of carved out his own part in this story. Finding what to do with him from this point should be interesting.
Posted by Amberain 9 years ago Report
You're going to need a sizable epilogue just to show how they manage to sort out all the various test subjects, not to mention what happens when all this becomes mainstream public knowledge.
Beyond that though, I'm quite interested to see what the Mad Science Kink crew does with all the Maxi-Chem experiment data and prototype products, because while most of that stuff is just crazy, some of it actually does have potential, when it's used by consensual parties, and isn't designed to be permanent.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I was fully intending to end this chapter with the crew back in the old warehouse, working on undoing the Maxi-Chem handiwork, but the darn chapter was already 10,000 words.
I think Julia, Brit, Lexi, and Sam will probably be spending a lot of time finding ways to take the over evil out of Max-Chem products. Should be fun!
Posted by DRayElliott 9 years ago Report
Contrary to what you said, I honestly don't think this story is too weird. But, then again, I have some strange fetishes like *gasp* HOLDING HANDS!!!!
Seriously though, I agree that the characters deserve a third series of stories chronicling how they delt with Maxi-Chem's shenanigans.
I'd also like to know how the crew deals with the moral implications of the isotope inoculations. For example, do they make the merging one available to, say, lesbian couples who's parents disapprove of same-sex relationships and they believe it's the only way to keep their parents from separating them? Assuming that they can get FDA approval. If they can show that the amount of radioactivity in the injections isn't of a harmful level, it should be possible, if a licensed medical center or practitioner administers the shots.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Now when you say you have a holding hand fetish, do you mean that you like stories with subtler signs of affection, or is this a literal hand-holding fetish?
And I'm glad you liked the story. The future implications of the combined Mad Science Kink and Maxi-Chem research will be fun to investigate.
Posted by DRayElliott 9 years ago Report
It's a joke, jeez.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I suspected as much, but the mere existence of this site, plus requests I've gotten that cater to such diverse kinks as hiccuping, smoking cigars, and being shot out of a cannon, have taught me not to assume anymore.
Posted by SSJBura 9 years ago Report
Wow! Great plan, good execution and good use of what you had done before! I liked this a lot and I loooove the assistant!!! They'll get along great with Julia and Brit. Hooray!!!
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
The assistant is a surprise favorite, it seems. I should probably name the guy.
Posted by Kreed360 9 years ago Report
1. This was a FANTASTIC finale, and I've really enjoyed reading this series.
2. The assistant gives me life.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks! For a while there it felt like I bit off more than I could chew.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 9 years ago Report
YES! It was amazing! You packed a lot of good stuff into this! I love the mass transference, one of my more niche kinks, and the way it was used each time was wonderful! Also, while she certainly won't approve of the ethics and methods through which it was obtained, I think Brit will now have all the data she can analyze for several months!
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Probably we'll see some video footage of Max-Chem experiments from time to time when I want to toy with the less moral side of vore.
Posted by RLord4268 9 years ago Report
Epic. Everything I hoped it would be. You've really outdone yourself and this is an excellent capstone to the entire hostile takeover storyline.
It would be fun if you did a sort of de-briefing. The HDTF crew restoring everyone, one by one in the warehouse and asking them how the felt while checking their name off a list. Maybe they have trouble separating some, or some don't want to be separated. Just some thoughts.
I'm really looking forward to a darker short every once in a while from the maxi-chem "archives" too. That just sounds delicious.
I hope your work life is getting better, I meant to message you earlier to wish you well, but my own work life has gotten pretty busy myself. Thanks for a great series, and I really appreciate all of the time you put into it.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I'm happy to have met expectations!
I certainly have to establish how the knots got untied.
Hopefully your work eases up on you too.
Posted by poldenski 9 years ago Report
this is a really good story i like how it ended i hope if you do a epilogue if you have the time that is.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I'll certainly give it a try.
Posted by Adseria 9 years ago Report
Nice work, as usual. Is this the end of this entire series (apart from the aforementioned epilogue (try saying that 3 times, fast!)), or is it going to go back to the original HDTF series?
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks! Pending opportunity, I'll almost certainly roll back to the standard "Mad Science Kink" type HDTF stuff, with less plot and more kink than this whole mess.
Posted by Adseria 9 years ago Report
Hey, I like plot! It makes it feel like the author put at least some effort into the story. But hey, who doesn't love a good kink, right? ;)
Posted by Adseria 9 years ago Report
Uh... Unless it's in a hosepipe, I guess...
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Well done!
Posted by Adseria 9 years ago Report
What for? You wrote the story. I just wrote a stupid play on words. It wasn't even punny! (...groan)
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Bah! Quality wordplay I say. QUALITY!
Posted by Adseria 9 years ago Report
One day, I'll actually bother to look up the "raise eyebrow" emoticon (no, not "emoji"). It's such a useful expression!
Posted by Arkron 8 years ago Report
Awww... no epilogue? I was really looking forward to having Brit be liquefied and pumped into Lexi's breasts in the epilogue. xD
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Never say never. Insomnia has caused stranger stories to drop out of my head.
Posted by Xabab 4 years ago Report
Goddamn. It took several days to read all stories in "science" folder, it was a wild ride. Absolutely awesom, 12/10, would recomend, the best and so on. I am not fluent in english, so wont even try to describe fully what I wanted to say. That's really one of the best if not the best vore stories I read, hit a huge number of kinks, while being clear of nasty things and well spread them between the chapters. And explanation how HDTF works was, while still being sci-fi, is not full of torsion fields or some other complete bullshit was quite satisfying to read. You studied some tech speciality, didnt you?
Are there more stories? I recall some mentioning hdtf I read years ago not from that story line...