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After getting arrested for some fairly minor misbehavior, the Zielinski sisters find themselves working off their debt to society as part of the nutritional program at the local zoo.
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Posted by nomnomfap 9 years ago Report
Love love love this story! I'm a sucker for willing prey, I hope you keep up the fantastic writing!
Posted by TwrchTwryth 9 years ago Report
Glad you liked it! I really like these sort of resigned situations, so stories like this can be really fun.
Posted by californasun 9 years ago Report
Nice, love these worlds with vore. Figured that the prey would beg more unless they reformed.
I hope the digestion was painful
Posted by TootCore 8 years ago Report
Gorilla vore is not very common, and the way the whole ordeal was scanned, and described, made it absolutely fantastic.
I sometimes find myself thinking about this peculiar scene from this story, and coming back to it.
Really. It's that great.
Posted by TootCore 8 years ago Report
Scened, not scanned.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Thanks! I always wondered about great ape vore. Since they're our closest relatives, evolutionarily speaking, you'd figure that in worlds where humans can vore, so could some of the apes. That's why I've done some work with Gigantopithecus in other stories.
Still, I know I like predators fighting over a meal, so I'm glad you enjoyed this too.
Posted by TootCore 8 years ago Report
Not only that, but how the great ape had a strong need to display his dominance over the other humans on the other side of the glass, and how everyone, humans included, were careless about the prey, Toni.
From the moment she's thrown in, she's doomed. Everything about the situation screams that she's nothing more than a meal, and yet your descriptions manage to engrave in the reader's mind how she was (and still is) a conscious human being, getting devoured. Perfect.
Posted by FoShiznit 4 years ago Report
I love this story so much that, even years later, I keep coming back to it. It hits that perfect sweet spot at the edge of semi-willing, where the prey don't want to be food, but aren't upset or fearful enough to do anything about it. Their resigned acceptance of an unjust fate bestowed and endorsed by their community is a rare nuance I've seen only a few times, most notably in the works of PD. I only wish you had more stories with this scenario.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 4 years ago Report
Nice catch on the PD reference, I was definitely thinking Carnivore Cafe (and maybe some Dolcett) when I wrote it. PD's work showed me that I LOVE it when the prey is annoyed or feels inconvenienced by fatal vore, so I sometimes try to channel that. This one is about as far as I'd want to go in that vein, but I'll keep it in mind that there are other fans out there.