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Commission for max123. Originally finished 4 January 2016 / Edited and Re-Uploaded July 2020.
An anthro dragoness takes a visit to a restaurant that serves human prey to its predator customers. Unfortunately, the restaurant is about to find it just how hard it is to feed a hungry dragon...
As always, I had a lot of fun writing this. Please let me know your thoughts!
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Posted by Halcyon 9 years ago Report
Thanks!! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. And I completely agree!
Posted by sarkonis 9 years ago Report
A great story!
Posted by Halcyon 9 years ago Report
Thanks so much!
Posted by Jimjohn101 9 years ago Report
Wow, great story! I always love the idea of restaurants serving live prey to preds hehe. This story was very good especially the ending!~
Posted by Halcyon 9 years ago Report
Thanks so much! And it's an idea I've always liked too. I especially like it when there are some prey who really resent the situation they're in, but some who have totally accepted their role as food. I tried to incorporate both in the story a little bit.
Posted by Jimjohn101 9 years ago Report
You did a great job doing it too haha! ^^
Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report
Interesting but I'm not much for tragic twists in character outcomes.
Posted by Halcyon 9 years ago Report
Tragic twist, huh? Does that mean you were expecting something different to happen? :p
Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report
No for the characters leading stable happy lives to lose everything in a single moment.
Posted by Umhuebr 9 years ago Report
Wonder what thoughts came to the owner's mind when he saw the steaming pile of poop that used to be his girlfriend (and some other girls)...
Posted by Halcyon 9 years ago Report
Same here, it could be a number of things. Maybe he decided to get over it and move on with his business... or maybe he swore revenge, sparking an epic quest (and a sequel)??
Posted by ketchup 9 years ago Report
Wow, great story! Between this, your previous story, and Nyan Adventures you're becoming one of my favorite contributors on Ekas!
Posted by Halcyon 9 years ago Report
Thanks so much for that generous compliment! ^.^ I hope you continue to enjoy my stuff in the future!
Posted by SuperheroFood 7 years ago Report
This is one of my favourite stories on this website. I was thinking about doing some kind of restaurant fic like this myself, but after reading this I'm not sure I could do a better job.
My only minor complaints are that the first few girls weren't fully roasted, and there wasn't more details on the preparation process, as I've been looking for a combination of cooking and straight up vore. But you did have one of the girls covering herself in chocolate sauce in front of her predator, and I really loved that.
My favourite part was easily the end. I just love that kind of disposal.
Also loved the Dragon girl's cruelty throughout. So hot.
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
Thanks so much! So glad you enjoyed it. The cooking was a bit limited by the terms of the commission, but I have another story, "Seafood," that has a bit more thorough (non-fatal) cooking in it, if you're interested. I'd like to try that out again sometime as well, but sorry to say not many people really like it that much xD
Don't discourage yourself! I'd love to see what you can come up with! ^^
Posted by Nomad3628 1 year ago Report
Favorite story from you ;)