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Commission for AUsernameUsedReturns. Originally finished 14 January 2016 / Edited and Re-Uploaded July 2020
A young human girl named Isabelle gets lost in the woods and encounters a huge hungry predator. Although the wild but intelligent animal seems friendly at first, it only has one thing on its mind... food!
This was a classic vore scenario, but with my own little twist to it. Please enjoy, and leave your thoughts!
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Posted by AzurePheonix 8 years ago Report
Awesome story overall, but in my opinion it could have had more teasing. Let the prey know they're going to get squeezed out of her backside trapped in an egg.
Regardless, I hope a sequel comes out like Isabelle did.
Posted by Halcyon 8 years ago Report
Thank you very much ^_^ and I tend to agree. Usually, I'm very fond of that kind of teasing. I don't know about a sequel, but I've got another story coming very soon that will have a TON of that kind of teasing~
Posted by AzurePheonix 8 years ago Report
Full tour or digestion? Either way, consider yourself watched.
Posted by Jamie263 8 years ago Report
That was brilliant. I suppose ending up in an egg doesn't sound so bad.
Posted by Halcyon 8 years ago Report
Thank you!! And I don't think so either. I tried to make it sound like Isabelle didn't really know what was going to happen to her, although I suppose you could also spin it like she knew she was going to be fine in the end but was terrified nonetheless ^w^ I don't know how she's going to get home now, though...
Posted by Jamie263 8 years ago Report
If it were me in that situation, I wouldn't object to her eating me lol.
Posted by Apostolos 8 years ago Report
Hmm so will Isabelle hatch out as a yoshi girl now?
Posted by Halcyon 8 years ago Report
That's up to you to decide, I think~
Posted by Pactborn 7 years ago Report
A fantastic story. The pacing is amazing, Isabelle's reactions and thoughts are captured wonderfully without detracting too much from the story and the Yoshi is just so delightfully ravenous~ Egg transformation is the icing on an already fantastic cake.
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
Thanks very much ^^ Actually, that last bit was the commissioner's idea, so I can't take credit for it. But it's something I've never tried before and I did my best with it!