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A woman explores the world of online, polyamorous dating and finds a couple with a very specific request...
DISCLAIMER: The unicorn is a metaphor. There is no horned equine in this story. If that's your thing, sorry.
This one started out a little more light-hearted, but then got a bit more serious. Not sure about the title, but I've gone through three, so I'm sticking with this one. Okay, that's one story down, eighteen more to go that I've already started...
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Posted by ryanshowseason3 9 years ago Report
loved it.
Been meaning to do the whole dating app angle sometime.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 9 years ago Report
Thanks. I've actually got another story with essentially the same set up but a different resolution. Once I found out that Thrindr exists, the ideas just started coming.
Posted by TW 9 years ago Report
Well done. This was great from beginning to end. I have a story line in mind with a dating app, but not quite to this extent. Now I'll wait to work on it because A.) I don't want people to think I copied you and B.) This is too good to cheapen with another of its kind. Perhaps one day, but that date is a ways off.
Very well done.
There is a small typo I caught
"I had stopped noticing him a little big ago,"
I thought you might have meant bit ago... Not big. I read the line twice in order to make sure you were not referencing his arousal returning.
Still, well done.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 9 years ago Report
Whoops, looks like that should have been "bit ago." Not the sort of thing that spellcheck would catch. I'll try to get that fixed at some point.
Thanks for the feedback. It seems like this is an idea that's starting to gain some traction, so feel free. Convergent inspiration, and all that.