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The end of the HoaE series. Islanzadi has defeated the evil tyrant Galbatorix! Now everything will be peaceful and happy...right?
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Posted by dragonvenom 9 years ago Report
Nice 8 out of 10
Posted by atreides213 9 years ago Report
Thanks :) Any specific criticisms you have?
Posted by dragonvenom 9 years ago Report
The vore part was a little short to me
Posted by dragonvenom 9 years ago Report
Also im surprised you left out Angela
Posted by atreides213 9 years ago Report
Honestly, she just slipped my mind ^^' I may have to revisit this series sometime in the future to include her :)
Posted by dragonvenom 9 years ago Report
Yeah to be honest she slipped my mind too until now lol
Posted by Heartless 9 years ago Report
This felt...rushed. Compared to the rest of the series... and I also feel it doesn't wrap it up in a satisfying way.. it feels more like it was written out of obligation then out of desire to complete it...Thats the best way i can describe it. It feels tacked....and to be honest so did part 4. Its...too predictable of an ending.
Posted by atreides213 9 years ago Report
I'll be honest, this one was kind of rushed. I sort of lost interest in this series and just wanted to give it a conclusive ending. But part 4 is about the level of quality of the first 3 parts, I thought.
Posted by Heartless 9 years ago Report
So it was. Sorry I was tired when I wrote that...upon rereading the fourth part was indeed on par with the first 3.
Posted by Heartless 9 years ago Report
My reason behind saying that when I was tired was I enjoyed part 4 less then the first 3, which isn't fair to lump in on a quality discussion since that a much much more subjective view.
Posted by atreides213 9 years ago Report
I understand ^^ Please tell me, what was it about part 4 that you didn't enjoy? Was it anything specific?
Posted by Heartless 9 years ago Report
Hmm...its hard to pinpoint. It wasn't bad, there wasn't anything wrong with it, I just have a bias against building up a character only to kill them off to a character not nearly as well built up. Its just a personal thing and it doesn't make the story lesser really, it just lowers my personal enjoyment of a story is all.