Posted by Bags 8 years ago Report

This story was amazing! The best one you ever wrote I have to say, you have to make more transformation vore stories please!

Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report

Thank you. I'm very pleased you enjoyed it!

Posted by Jamie263 8 years ago Report

Brilliant. I've often fantasized about this sort of scenario. And have even read stories about it too. Nice work.

Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report

Thanks. This one was very much written as fantasy material.

Posted by New 8 years ago Report

Very nice indeed. I like a good game of chance.

Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report

Thanks. Once the "players" have been transformed, there's absolutely nothing they can do to influence the outcome. The only way they can play the game is passively, waiting to see what chance decides. I felt that was quite a fun aspect to use here.

Posted by New 8 years ago Report

I agree. I hope to see something like it again.

Posted by Indighost 8 years ago Report

Cute story. Having read a lot of your stuff, it is interesting to see what you describe and what you leave undescribed :)

Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report

Sometimes that depends on the story, but… yes, I have preferences in terms of focus. :) Thanks.

Posted by Vixen20 8 years ago Report

Wait, are these the same women from the Unwilling version of the 'transform into food' sort of stuff, you've done before? On mobile and can't really look.

Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report

No, they're new (one-off) characters.

Posted by oishi1 8 years ago Report

I like the fact that nobody gets what they really want.

Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report

Yes, it's not *exactly* an "all's well that ends well" story. ;) William would have preferred to be in Charlotte's place (kissing Lyssa and admiring her soft full tummy), and Charlotte in William's (being an oyster digested inside a hot little tummy). That's the risks of a game of chance!

Posted by Indighost 8 years ago Report

I really loved that about this story. I find that to be a key element of good writing, especially for us who like to do similar food-related fetishes, but want the readers to be a little uncertain and surprised . Not knowing if the characters will reach their goal or not can add a lot to a story.

Posted by kbDArt 2 months ago Report

Love this story. Both very erotic and fun. I’ve seen different versions on this theme by oishi1 and girlfood as well. All done very well.

Posted by French_snack 2 months ago Report

Thanks. Erotic and fun is what I was going for. And I probably was inspired by oishi1 and girlfood. :)