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"A paladin is sent to investigate why a far flung town is sacrificing children to stop some unseen monster."
This is a piece of short fiction that though non-vore, I wanted to share. It originally was for a small contest, and had a wickedly low word ceiling of 2k words, but I am considering writing "the rest of the story" that came about while I struggled to keep this one under that ceiling.
Posted by Alienraptor 8 years ago Report
very good. would like to read the "rest of the story" good way to tie-in your and angels OC's. almost missed the hints. good to have you back
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Posted by Imrhys 8 years ago Report
Thank you.
Yeah, in the "rest of the story" those tie-ins will be vastly more "obvious" *chuckles*
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Posted by Alienraptor 8 years ago Report
good work, more please, good to have you back.
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Posted by Jacquelope 8 years ago Report
Nice one! Welcome back!
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Posted by Imrhys 8 years ago Report
Thank you ^^
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Posted by Indighost 8 years ago Report
Your writing is really getting better! Great work!
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Posted by Imrhys 8 years ago Report
Thank you, and yes, this was my first serious attempt with editing. It is only about 2, 3 (1-5) skill level, but, still vast improvement over five, six years ago <3
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Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report
Glad to see you sharing this here, it's quite well done. If you do write the "rest of the story," I'd be glad to give it the copyediting pass we didn't have time for with the contest deadline.
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Posted by Imrhys 8 years ago Report
Thank you, and considering the writer's block "The Home" is currently getting due to... Well I found a plot hole I have not found an answer to yet, I may just do "rest of the story" sooner than later, lol >_>
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