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NOTE: I wrote a journal asking for feedback on Pred Quest 3. Please read it here: https://aryion.com/forum/blog/Humbug/pred_quest_3_feedback_b-28007.html
I'm looking for both positive and negative criticism here. Kinda want to know how you guys think the game is going. You can respond on this submission too, if you'd like.
>> Try to find another place to hide.
>> Zoey gets the choice to eat Liz later.
You are absolutely fucking furious, but you take a deep breath, smile your most malicious smile possible, wave to Liz as you walk toward her, and say, "Oh hey! Yeah, she said you'd be able to help me with my theatre homework, since that's your major and all!"
Liz looks confused, her eyes darting between your bouncing gut and your face as you approach.
When you finally reach her, you get reeeeeeeal close, grab her sleeve, tilt her hat up, and whisper, "You blew my cover, you dumb fuck. They're expecting a skunk with a belly, though, so if you approach them, they'll be confused. I'm gonna take your spot now, so don't fuck this up."
You whip her around and shove her forward. She lets out a small, "Ah!" as she stumbles a few steps, then she shrugs and heads to where you were hiding as you hustle to her position, belly sloshing and lightly protesting. You swear you're going to snarf that bitch as soon as you get a chance, sorority rules or no.
YOU ARE NOW LIZ OSBOURNE
Jeez, Zoey...you were just trying to help...
Anyway, you have a bunch of candy stuff you can use for this, like your taffy spread and your can of crystalizing spray. You're not sure you can take on three people at once like Zoey can, but...oh hey. Audrey's over there. Maybe she can help.
YOU ARE NOW ZEE WILLIAMS
You're kind of giggling after hearing Liz's loud voice and Zoey's clever response, so you decide to look to see what's going on.
...Oh hey. One of those three girls is waiting inside, potato launcher ready. She must be trying to ambush Zoey or something. Maybe you should help out after all...? You think about it.
NOTE: Hidden in one of Zoey's three "Style" options in the character selection phase will be an encounter with Liz, where Zoey can eat her once this Raid is over. You horrible people. D:
OPTIONS:
http://www.strawpoll.me/10383098 <- Should Liz ask Audrey for help?
http://www.strawpoll.me/10383100 <- Liz's action
http://www.strawpoll.me/10383114 <- Zee's action
NOTE: Voting ended at midnight, EST. The results are as-follows:
Ask for Audrey's help?
Yes: 1-57 (58 votes)
No: 58-90 (33 votes)
Result: 24 (Yes)
Liz action
Approach and talk: 1-55 (56 votes)
Hide: 56-86 (31 votes)
Rush out: 87-93 (7 votes)
Result: 36 (Approach and talk)
Success: 1-70
Failure: 71-100
Result: 73 (Failure)
Zee action:
Sneak in and eat: 1-62 (63 votes)
Sneak in and take hostage: 63-75 (13 votes)
Wait and see: 76-82 (7 votes)
Rush and eat: 83-87 (5 votes)
Rush and hostage: 88-90 (3 votes)
Result: 77 (Wait)
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Posted by tariq 8 years ago Report
>NOTE: Hidden in one of Zoey's three options will be an encounter with Liz, where Zoey can eat her once this Raid is over. You horrible people. D:
In one of Zoey's three options? I don't see options for her here. So does this refer to a later set of options or was this meant to refer to Liz or Zee's actions?
Posted by Humbug 8 years ago Report
Oh, I mean her "Style" options after the raid is over.
Posted by joe354 8 years ago Report
I won't mind an update for the location of everyone at this moment. Just to see where Ringo is.
Posted by Humbug 8 years ago Report
Was actually going to do something like that in the next update, but Ringo's in the center of the building between where Zee was stationed and where Zoey was stationed. Just look a few pages back and you can see the map. :)
Posted by joe354 8 years ago Report
ah good good.
Posted by Thatonepred 8 years ago Report
Liz's second option and Zee's third and fourth options could be an interesting combo.
And, it is with this thought, I realize that I just want to pick the funny options. Such a pity Liz didn't get the crap beaten out of her, but hey-ho. Will of the audience.
One thing that strikes me as odd: Zee in that door. Either someone took the time to make a picture of her ON that door, or she's walking through it like some damn ghost.
I hope it's the latter. "WOOOOOO! I'm coming to SNARF YOOUUU!"
Posted by Humbug 8 years ago Report
Will of random.org, actually! Audience weights the probabilities, and then I roll randomly.
And lol. That's just her pressing her hands and face against the door in the gloom of night. XD
Also, the funny options are always appreciated. I got really tired of people trying to be careful in Pred Quest 2, so that's why I'm making failure less of an issue and the choice a random roll. :)
Posted by Thatonepred 8 years ago Report
Okay, that makes sense.
... Give Zee a bedsheet! :D "I am the Phantom Snarfer!"
In all seriousness, having funny options is a good thing. Random bouts of comedy is a pretty good thing in between all the careful, serious options. And having failure be "Ya done Goofed, but you can still clean up the mess" is certainly more interesting than what one normally tends to get in most any game.
This page proves it. Quite clever action on Zoey's behalf, I have to admit.
Posted by Humbug 8 years ago Report
That's the way I see it too. Lighthearted goofiness makes doing something big like this all the more bearable. :D
And thanks! Zoey seems like kind of a brute, but that's only part of her story. She's of average intelligence, but mostly has a temper and a strong will, which gets her in trouble a lot.
Posted by DarkPinkie 8 years ago Report
This raid stuff have me quite confused with it's rapid perception changes. Otherwise I think it's going pretty well.
Also we kinda accept Liz as a snackrifice as she is pretty much the least liked character I think (she is IMO the worst).
Posted by Humbug 8 years ago Report
Oh yeah? I'll have to keep that in mind then. D:
And seems like it. XD
Posted by Achilles 8 years ago Report
Poor Liz!
Posted by Humbug 8 years ago Report
OH NO!