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Alan is a shoe-in to win the World Betterment Fair with his shrinking device. This is his chance to secure his future and guarantee his career for life. Too bad everyone else at the fair ends up shrinking.
Everyone except, of course, the biggest, grossest bully Alan knows: Kevin. And while Alan just wants to help his tiny friends, Kevin and his loud, noxious gut have other plans.
A commission for madsci who is quite good at thinking up gross characters. XD
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Posted by Mad51 8 years ago Report
Couldn't be more grateful for your willingness to write vile things but more importantly communicating with me through out the process and doing everything in a timely professional manner. Would highly recommend!
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Thanks so much for the positive feedback! ^^
Posted by Tsubasa17 8 years ago Report
love it. Can we have more please?
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
You just might~ ;)
Posted by Tsubasa17 8 years ago Report
Yay! Maybe actual anal ravaging next time, maybe some unwilling pred as well? Gods this was good
Posted by AngelTheGood 8 years ago Report
Jesus this was great! Love this pred!
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Thank you! :D
Posted by Chaos 8 years ago Report
Damn, this was awesome. I love many different kinds of preds, but the gross ones are always the most fascinating. Great job!
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
They truly are. Thanks!
Posted by thegrumpymadman 8 years ago Report
What a great situation, and to make things better a nice twisted male pred. There's something powerful about a muscular pred who gives up their appeal for gluttony.
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Very much so. Giving up the abs for the flab. XD
Posted by lyingunderfire 8 years ago Report
I have always like this type of pred. Not the gross type, but the type that gives into hedonism.
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Kevin is definitely a hedonist, at least once he has a world full of tinies to slurp down.
Posted by HelperofThor 8 years ago Report
Shouldn't it be the world (is un)fair?
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Hey, the world is fair... for predators.
Posted by HelperofThor 8 years ago Report
That still isn't fair. He got the best deal possible. Thats not fair it's life always sides for the preds!
Posted by Fez 8 years ago Report
Wow. That was AMAZING, thanks madsci for letting me know this story, and great job Belloc. It just hitted all the buttons
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)
Posted by Mad51 8 years ago Report
I knew you'd enjoy it! Glad it hit the right buttons.
Posted by Malezor 8 years ago Report
Nice story. I love the details you put in it. ^^
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Gracias! I try. ^_^
Posted by stuffedpotbellies 7 years ago Report
If I could add this to my favorites more than just once I so would. I absolutely love it!
Posted by Belloc 7 years ago Report
Thank you! Glad you like it.