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Hey, long time no see. Sorry this took so long, but I've had a number of distractions and dilemmas on my end. Nothing too serious; mostly just in my head. I'll be fine, promise.
Anyway, here's a loli who gets a private lesson from her teacher. Naturally, things go awry and someone ends up in a stomach. I think the tags'll spoil a bit so mind your eyes.
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Posted by Tsubasa17 8 years ago Report
Mine. I favorite it, its mine!
And with that said, you forgot a tag, I think, unless you don't want to spoil it, of course
Posted by Cuddlekins 8 years ago Report
lol, thanks. Which one did I miss? o:
Posted by Tsubasa17 8 years ago Report
Ah, it seems you've put it in since, so all is good!
Hmmmmm, maybe you should have Mezebel do a "little" threesome with two of her younger students. Or a foursome, possibly. And don't know your feelings on it, but maybe during this three/4some, Mezebel demonstrates her cock growing, and feeding, abilities :3
Posted by Cuddlekins 8 years ago Report
Eh, I don't really write dick stuff tho :c
Posted by Tsubasa17 8 years ago Report
Alrighty then, just take out the dick part and you'll have a succubus feast with lots of gratuitous loli sex
Posted by Cuddlekins 8 years ago Report
We'll see. Maybe I'll consider it for a future story
Posted by HMDVore 8 years ago Report
Dick Stuff
Posted by Cuddlekins 8 years ago Report
Indeed, stuff with dicks.
Posted by Chaos 8 years ago Report
Very sexy, I love teacher preds they always educate their prey before eating them.
Posted by Cuddlekins 8 years ago Report
Thanks much o:
Posted by Sabrina 8 years ago Report
This was a great read, really enjoyed this one.
The scenario was great, I mean who doesn't want a Succubs as a teacher?
Yout dialouge is fantastic as well. Just wonderfully done. The way Mezebel teases Fern...is just. Well I said it once! But its so well done.
Sorry for being redundant! But this was just a very well done story!
Posted by Cuddlekins 8 years ago Report
Ah, thanks :D
Posted by AllahSnackbar 8 years ago Report
More Cuddlekins? Oh yeah, this calls for some good reading tea.
Probably one of your best stories to date, up there with School Lunch. My one quibble is one word kinda repeats a lot, but otherwise I really enjoyed this. Nice to see a pred with some bust, too.
Posted by Cuddlekins 8 years ago Report
Thanks o: Which word was that? I might be able to work on that in the future
Posted by AllahSnackbar 8 years ago Report
It would be 'cunt'. I get the need for variety, just here it's used a bit to much.
Posted by FriedKiller 8 years ago Report
At one point you made put Ms. Fern instead of Ms. Belle: "When their lips finally parted, Fern laid on the bed, panting and blushing, as Ms. Fern smiled down at her."
Posted by Cuddlekins 8 years ago Report
Fixed. Thanks a bunch o: