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Julia finally gets to the task of figuring out how to reverse one of Maxi-Chem's more worrisome experiments.
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Posted by MontyMiyagi2513 8 years ago Report
Wouldn't this be HDTF Hostile Takeover 12 instead of HDTF 14
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Probably, but at some point it seemed appropriate to just shift back to the old HDTF numbering, because tht plot is wrapped up.
Posted by MontyMiyagi2513 8 years ago Report
Just curious
Posted by Goblingobler 8 years ago Report
Really well written story, loved it! :D
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Posted by Goblingobler 8 years ago Report
Love all the HDTF stuff! Been reading through the hostile take-over stuff recently. Trying to pace myself though :B
Posted by DRayElliott 8 years ago Report
Finally, more.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
It's been sitting with the first thousand words written for like a month, I finally got a bout of insomnia and finished it.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 8 years ago Report
Great to see another story from you, especially on this storyline! Super happy to see this addressed, and I love how you wrote Number 3's disposition toward having 2 restored.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Thanks! I was going to have a slightly longer ending in which Number 2 got revenge and had Number 3 implanted for a while, but I ran out of writing time and couldn't work out a logical excuse to do so before sleepy time.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 8 years ago Report
I also REALLY loved the talk of the self-rental forms on their website, and how people could use those. It's reminding me of the Trust Machines stories over on deviantart, which I dearly love.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
I've read a few of those stories. Pretty good stuff!
Posted by SSJBura 8 years ago Report
Hazzah! This is awesome! Glad you're both writing and continuing!
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Jones 8 years ago Report
Oh man. I've been waiting for this particular story for a long time, and in no way did you disappoint. Saw your comment about #2 getting revenge on #3. Would be be awesome, but can wait for later.
I know I'm a broken record, but excellent writing. I love your work, and I'm glad to see you back for a bit. Thank you :)
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
I'm glad you like my stuff!
Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report
Ooh, fun! It's good to see what happened to these two. Poor number 2, stuck being teased all that time without getting to finish. I liked the retrieval method Julia ended up using.
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
The way my stories form in my head is strange. If I'd had notes for this one it would have said. "Boobs. Vacuum? Milk pump thing. Nipple dive!" And the rest was just connecting those dots.
Posted by LittleBeast 8 years ago Report
You should probably put something in the description about this being after Hostile Takeover for the sake of newcomers?
Also, excellent as usual. :)
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Than's probably a good idea. And thanks!