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...it mattered little. Strength in numbers. Wolves hunted in packs for a reason. As fierce as our parents were, there was only so much they could do before they were overwhelmed. A couple of wolves tossed on their backs or clawed up? There were more to take their place.

It was a lesson I learned first-hand, watching the inevitable conclusion.

It was hard watching my parents swallowed alive before my eyes. I kept hoping, wishing they'd continue to fight back, would claw their way back up the throat of the wolf who'd eaten them, or even come right through their belly...

...Beast-person physiology was not designed like that, though. Stomachs were tough, made to keep prey in that had claws, horns, sharp teeth...and this was hardly the first time they'd hunted. I kept wishing...but my wishes were in vain. They continued to fight and squirm, but it was already over. Had been since the moment they'd been eaten.


Perhaps harder than watching, though, was knowing it was our fault this had happened. They could have ran easily. They'd have gotten away. Instead, they chose to fight to save us, and for that...they paid the ultimate price. We'd just wanted to play. Explore. Discover everything, play with everything, learn EVERYTHING.

I remember thinking 'I just wanted to play. For that, I earned this?' Foolish thoughts, but I was young. 'Play' doesn't matter to hungry predators. Only filling their bellies.

One by one, I watched my siblings disappear, little more than bulges sliding down a throat or already squirming inside a contented wolf's belly. I didn't want to watch, but some sort of morbid curiosity didn't allow me to turn away. It was terrifying, and worse...I knew I was next. I was not so young as to be completely clueless as to what that meant. I'd be gone, forever. It'd just be over...

I was paralyzed when one of the smaller female wolves sauntered over to me and casually picked me up by the throat. It hurt. I could feel her claws digging into the back of my neck, but I was too terrified to move, too terrified to fight back. How could I, anyway? It was already over.

With wide eyes, I watched her lick her lips, watched her jaws part, revealing those sharp, white teeth. I could tell she was hungry, eager for someone just my size to fill her belly...




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I am the ultimate slacker! x3 Kinda got behind on these, but getting the ball rolling again! The next page of 'Queen of Hearts'! I hope you all enjoy the prologue! ^_^ Finally getting a smidge of vore here, but...going to be much more later on...>:3

Little bit of a 'one of those moments' sort of part of the story, but...well, things have gotta get better, right?! D:

Poor tiny foxie! >_<

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mthekiller362

Posted by mthekiller362 2 years ago

Unfortunately, this is how life goes. The strong rule over the weak.

*places hands together in front of self. Left hand in a fist, right hand has two fingers pointed up, and does personal prayer*

Lest we forget.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Super true! :3 Especially in this world!

Demicus

Posted by Demicus 2 years ago

;~; why u do dis.

Still, explains why she is so unconcerned with her prey later in life. Talk about your hard lessons.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

It....doesn't QUITE get better yet....x3

But yes! This is pretty much a harsh lesson, early age! D: Poor, poor foxie! >_<

VertGreenHeart

Posted by VertGreenHeart 2 years ago

I have to say this is a powerful backstory

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

I'm glad you enjoy it! :3 Emotional power what was I'm shooting for!...and it's not over yet!

mthekiller362

Posted by mthekiller362 2 years ago

It would be interesting, if, in the next part, she ended up getting eaten, then somehow made it out. She would get to see what being both pred and prey is like.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

If her parents are unable to get out, and they're larger, stronger, and tougher...odds are, if she gets eaten, it'll be a one-way trip to digestiontown! D:

VertGreenHeart

Posted by VertGreenHeart 2 years ago

Logic!? In Vore!?!? What worl has this become!!!!?

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

NOWHERE I WANT TO LIVE ANYMORE!! D: Nuuuu logics!

vegeta002

Posted by vegeta002 2 years ago

The oldest of life's little self-fulfilling prophecies.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Mm-hmm! x3

vegeta002

Posted by vegeta002 2 years ago

I always saw it more as something the crueller villains use as an excuse, though.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Well, Ryla is certainly not a saint...x3

vegeta002

Posted by vegeta002 2 years ago

I noticed, pretty much any times she's around someone that's not Ryla. Quite the fluffy little "Villain Protagonist", as TVTropes would put it.

Empathy seems to be one virtue she struggles with.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Yes. x3 Though, she WILL have her moments in 'Queen of Hearts'...

vegeta002

Posted by vegeta002 2 years ago

Oh?

Though I suppose repeating her own past means reducing the chance of starting her own family, so less risk of losing another family (not hers, at least).

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

That's very true...and she's not started a family, yet. According to how the events of Queen of Hearts transpires...well...chance might not arise!

vegeta002

Posted by vegeta002 2 years ago

I doubt the chance ever really would appear, you'd probably need non-magical auto-resurrection just to survive long enough to get a chance...

PlatypusUltra

Posted by PlatypusUltra 2 years ago

Oh man. I don't think I'm build for vore after all. Can't they just all be alive and get along? xD Or at least respawn or something? Nice story though, got a lot of depth to it!

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Is a bit more rare to see it depicted like this, but...x3 Well, as the story progresses, will likely get away from this theme!

ItsSomething

Posted by ItsSomething 2 years ago

Poor Ryla. But oh dear, how will she get away from this?

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

With Rawrs!

Raaaawr!

Scary fox! >:3

ItsSomething

Posted by ItsSomething 2 years ago

She's lookin' a biiiiiiit too, uh, preyish to be scary.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Dangit, you're right. D: Hopefully, wolf isn't hungry! >_< Or a bit too overzealous...

ItsSomething

Posted by ItsSomething 2 years ago

Wolf looks very much hungry.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Dis is true D:

ItsSomething

Posted by ItsSomething 2 years ago

Oh noes. Ryla might be food! D: Someone help her by eating all the wolves!

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

:O!!! Wolves come in Snack Packs!

ItsSomething

Posted by ItsSomething 2 years ago

Hmm, but the rest of the foxes might be saved, too! Then Ryla will be a bit less apathetic towards prey.

DrashaTheImmortal

Posted by DrashaTheImmortal 2 years ago

Poor ryla she has such a sad back story

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Yes. :3 Gets...a little worse from here, but it picks back up!

DrashaTheImmortal

Posted by DrashaTheImmortal 2 years ago

O damn it's gona get worse ? I hope ryla gets a chance at revenge

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

According to how many people want to see that...MAYBE!

Alas, she's too young for it now...D:

DrashaTheImmortal

Posted by DrashaTheImmortal 2 years ago

na your never to young to try XD

Heartless

Posted by Heartless 2 years ago

You know I'm gonna comment on something about this backstory I think this would result in the opposite of what people usually think, I know this kinda backstory would definitely lead to someone having a desire for revenge, but I don't believe it would lead to complete apathy to other peoples plights. I'd think that, if you went through the horror of whats going on here, you'd NEVER want to subject someone else to the horror and fear...like...wouldn't you want things to change... not stay the same? Prevent others from having to expierience this? Iunno just my two cents on that kinda thing.. other then that I love how this is coming along.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

You are likely completely correct! Aaaaand...as you'll find out...

Ryla refuses to eat children unless she absolutely has to, exactly for this sort of reason...x3 There's a certain level of 'this is what I experienced' that...dissuades her!

Heartless

Posted by Heartless 2 years ago

I'm looking forward to see how this whole thing plays out, this part got me much more emotionally invested then I thought it would.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Next one up within a week, I think! :3 Glad it's decent enough to get an emotional reaction! ^_^

vegeta002

Posted by vegeta002 2 years ago

What about adults she knows have kids? Considering her parents are part of her experience.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Well...she turned out okay....x3

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vegeta002

Posted by vegeta002 2 years ago

Depending on what her parents were like, they may or may not agree.

For some reason, I just imagined Ryla becoming a vore-themed version of Batman... saving the world by eating criminals.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Phsssst...hahahaha. XD Foxwoman to the rescue! x3

vegeta002

Posted by vegeta002 2 years ago

I'm sure no-one saved by her will be traumatized at all.

Ridwanwolf

Posted by Ridwanwolf 2 years ago

That look of dispair on rylas face....
Its..... Delectable.


Sorry, my inner saddist was awakened by this. Like unf..... I still feel heartbroken for my favorite pred.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

>:3 Poor fox...

Is the look she's seen on quite a few other's...

Ridwanwolf

Posted by Ridwanwolf 2 years ago

Indeed.

Can I have a lil ryla of my own~
Pretty please!

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Nuuuuu. D: Unless you promise to take care of her!

...She'll POSSIBLY eat you. But then, tiny full fox! :D

Ridwanwolf

Posted by Ridwanwolf 2 years ago

Id brush her hair. And pet her, and feeeed her, and Id dress her up in super pretty dresses!

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Feed her...peoples?! :O

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Also, hair brush = happy Ryla. x3

Ridwanwolf

Posted by Ridwanwolf 2 years ago

Lil fishies and the occasional sheep!

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

D:!!! This...

Well, this IS fox food...but not optimal fox food! XD

Ridwanwolf

Posted by Ridwanwolf 2 years ago

Fineeeee she can have a dog or two as well

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

...Or a wolf. >:3

Ridwanwolf

Posted by Ridwanwolf 2 years ago

But then who eould feed her!

Steelen

Posted by Steelen 2 years ago

Ah, the less fun side of vore, where lives get ruined, innocence gets taken and you really wish you could stick a knife or seven in the bad guys and save everyone.
Oh well, such is life in these worlds

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Yep. x3 This is certainly the 'less fun' side. Alas, it's nature...

...and the 'fun side' is going to come around soon enough! x3

Steelen

Posted by Steelen 2 years ago

Hopefully with some very sweet (and filling) revenge

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Very possible...>:3

martyr

Posted by martyr 2 years ago

Fooooxxiiiieeee....... T_____T
Too much feels.... ;w;

JamCat

Posted by JamCat 2 years ago

The feels, so much feels. I mean, her mom and dad...and siblings....noooo!! :o

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Nuuuuu. D: Poor foxie!

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

ALL...the feels! D:

TheBlueDevil

Posted by TheBlueDevil 2 years ago

Poor Ryla ;-;

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Saddest tiny fox! D:

TheBlueDevil

Posted by TheBlueDevil 2 years ago

Some reason I think Ryla would be a perfect ghoul >.>

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

G..ghoul? D:

TheBlueDevil

Posted by TheBlueDevil 2 years ago

They can only eat humans, their eyes change to black and red and they can only die by other ghouls kagunes o3o

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

But but but....So many types of peoples left uneaten! D:

TheBlueDevil

Posted by TheBlueDevil 2 years ago

Still counts if they're partly human! 'w'

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Yums! >:3

mojo-2131285

Posted by mojo-2131285 2 years ago

Not to be crude, but is the fact that the wolves are brown a clever bit of foreshadowimg?

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

....XD Hahahaha....

Well...who knows...x3

TOBI

Posted by TOBI 2 years ago

Very good story

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Glad you're enjoying! ^_^

atreides213

Posted by atreides213 2 years ago

DARK. NESS. NO. PARENTS!

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Hellloooo darkenss my olddddd friend!

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Darkness too!

atreides213

Posted by atreides213 2 years ago

DARKNESS. NO PARENTS. LOTS OF PREY...kinda makes it better.

JamCat

Posted by JamCat 2 years ago

*whatches them all being eaten. Cracks nuckles.*

"That's enough, DIVINE INTROVENTION!" ;D

Lol jk, looking forward to more if this comic! Revenge, rrreeeeeveeennggeeee!!!

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Seems alot of people are calling for revenge...x3 Might...MIGHT....head that way later on..x3

fatbelly

Posted by fatbelly 2 years ago

On one hand I kinda feel sorry for Ryla, but then I remember how she is and I don't any more. Though this does explain some of her heartlessness.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Who knows how she'd have turned out without certain...pivotal moments in her life! So, it's okay to feel sorry for tiny, innocent Ryla!...maybe less so for full-grown Ryla. XD

SnipsChan

Posted by SnipsChan 2 years ago

;_;

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

D:!

SnipsChan

Posted by SnipsChan 2 years ago

Poor Ryla DDDX It makes me want to snuggle her and feed her and pet her and then cry ;m;

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Tiny Ryla needs ALL the snugs and hugs and feeds!

SnipsChan

Posted by SnipsChan 2 years ago

Little Ryla is so cute ;w; I will give the snugs, hugs and feeds!

cloudrunnerteeny

Posted by cloudrunnerteeny 2 years ago

thats... horrifying! ; 3; poor lttle cassy, such a cute little darling exposed to this

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Poor Foxie...D:

And is doesn't get too much better from here, just yet...

Kiutogi

Posted by Kiutogi 2 years ago

And apparently wolves also have hammerspace bellies. Quite a strange trait.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Hammer space bellies? :0

Kiutogi

Posted by Kiutogi 2 years ago

Bellies that have limitless space within, and no change of appearance on the outside.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Oooh. x3 Well, these wolves don't. I guess others might? XD

Shady_Knight

Posted by Shady_Knight 2 years ago

You think YOU'RE lazy? It takes me about a month to finish what should be a shortish story, all because I can't stay focused for very long.

Incidentally, are you open to offering critiques and advice on peoples' work? I'm rather fond of your writing style and I can't help but think it has something mine doesn't. Then again, I feel that way about a fair few other writers. So I'd be interested to see if you could find one area I could improve.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Absolutely! Always happy to help when I can! Anything specific? Glad you like my style as well! :D

Shady_Knight

Posted by Shady_Knight 2 years ago

Cool! Glad you wanna lend a hand. I'll send you a PM at a later date so I don't swamp the comment section.

While I'm here, slight criticism about the comic, Ryla and her sister don't look terrified in the first and last panel of this strip so much as they look mildly surprised. Like all that's missing as another panel of them calmly saying "Well that's a thing that just happened."

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Criticism is always okay if it's constructive! Aaaaand...yeah, surprise mixed with fear...x3 Maybe coulda had a little more work!

Shady_Knight

Posted by Shady_Knight 2 years ago

To put it another way, if you were to take the first panel out of context, it doesn't necessarily convey that they're witnessing a horrifying scene like their parents being eaten alive. The second panel could have been, I dunno, something completely random, like the giant chicken man from Family Guy bloodied on the floor, and their expression in the first panel would have been just as appropriate.

If you ask me, the big problem is the eyebrows. They should be curved inward instead of outward to show some sadness and reinforce that they're afraid of what they're seeing. Adding some motion lines to show that they're trembling in fear, especially in the last panel as Ryla is being lifted by the neck, would also help in my opinion.

MouseBoy

Posted by MouseBoy 2 years ago

this is why us mouse people are such great hiders~

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Best hiders! But also super tasty! XD

MouseBoy

Posted by MouseBoy 2 years ago

thats why i wont hide from you~

thevoremorpher07

Posted by thevoremorpher07 2 years ago

aww *hopes story turns for the better* #happyendingsmatter

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Here's hoping! :3

boyot

Posted by boyot 2 years ago

so many feels, yet i feel my self wanting to do some dissection.... into the lives of my characters that is, but still this explains alot about how she's so unconcerned about her prey...

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

It certainly helps explain it to some degree...x3 But more will come later.

boyot

Posted by boyot 2 years ago

I can't wait XD

DimensionalKitty

Posted by DimensionalKitty 2 years ago

Ryla get out of there you need to survive


I just thought how ironic would it be if these wolfie meanies were somehow relatives of felicity

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

Felicity is a kitty! Sorta. Half-kitty. Mostly? Yes. XD

Run Ryla ruuuun! :O

DimensionalKitty

Posted by DimensionalKitty 2 years ago

If she needs to i could hug her

Jayezox

Posted by Jayezox 2 years ago

Is she like vorish Batman?

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

I...AM...FOXGIRL! >:3

CGR-7

Posted by CGR-7 2 years ago

Goodness, Ryla, that would cause some very traumatic survivor's guilt later on in life. Are you still carrying any of this mental weight to this day? =\

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 2 years ago

You're right, it likely would! You can bet...it's still thought about to this day. x3

ColonelYeo

Posted by ColonelYeo 2 years ago

Something about the faces in panel two triggers me. Makes me want to punch a wolf. In the face.

This is getting pretty heavy (and pretty good). Quite a powerful start to a backstory.

CassyInko

Posted by CassyInko 1 year ago

Yeah. x3 Saddest times are ahead...