Posted by fredhailton42 8 years ago Report

Goodness, these are fun stories! O.O Can't think of where I'd wanna go from here, except maybe Joseph slipping back into teasing James while in his balls. <3

Posted by Jikarite 8 years ago Report

Thanks for the comment. Glad you're enjoying them.

Posted by futavorelover 8 years ago Report

great works, but at this point just feel really sorry for james and his shitty "friend"

Posted by futavorelover 8 years ago Report

maybe they need a taste of how it feels to understand how bad it is being in his position and not just about how it feels for them, you know "walk a mile in his/her shoes" and all that and realize that they shouldn't just leave him in there forever

Posted by zeek175 8 years ago Report

Yeah, I kind of agree there. Her complete domination over him and just how SEXUAL she always acts towards CVing him is really hot, but he seriously needs to get out of there before she kills him.

His lapses in consciousness are getting longer and longer too. But that's kind of hot also. Part of me honestly thought his first reaction to being around a witness would be "OH GOD PLEASE HELP ME"
It's weird in these stories when you don't really know what to root for!
I've been loving everything about these stories so far, but part of me really wants to see James escape for his own sake.
Kind of reminds me of those old Tristan Hawthorne stories where he'd write one version with a happy ending and one with a death ending. I guess we'll just have to see where the author takes us.

Posted by futavorelover 8 years ago Report

exactly it's just one of things where you enjoy it but also are just like "what the hell no no no no no....NO!!!!!" but things are what they are
yeah i would like to see him kinda get what he wants that is not be subjugated by them to live forever in their cocks for their own pleasure not knowing what it's like on his end of things it would be different if he consented and enjoyed it and let him out to do things or they did it for periods at a time like a sexual act/sleeping then even if it's forced it's just for a little bit, but it is forced upon him which isn't awful (i mean that's how unwilling vore stories go right and plenty of us enjoy that) but it's just one of those things that strike a cord in ones self and make you feel for them that's what make stories good and actually stories and not just a quick fap tale or something like that
this got really wordy really fast i apologize late night ramblings and all

Posted by Jikarite 8 years ago Report

I love your feedback. Thanks for taking the time to make these detailed comments!

Posted by Jikarite 8 years ago Report

Thanks for taking the time to leave such detailed feedback!

Posted by Mustelid 8 years ago Report

I cant help but think the bully is going to horde James and refuse giving him back

Posted by Scion 8 years ago Report

Wow, this is awesome!!!!!!

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDD

cock fucking is so good

Your writing and sense of domination is awesome. I hope she also ends up swallowing Josephs :)

Posted by Scion 8 years ago Report

lol, there isn't an edit button. But the way you flesh out the subtle details really is what makes this story.

Posted by Uryx 8 years ago Report

I REALLY loved the first two in this series, and I'm glad it's ongoing still yet, but I have to say that this one kind of crossed the line into an area that is far more uncomfortable to me, it was downright abusive. I know a little abuse it just the way of things when it comes to this sort of fantasy, but I personally feel like this story went too far.

I don't think you should remove this story, far from it in fact, I feel like having a point where things are outright "horrid" (depending upon point of view, of course) are great for the development of the story as a whole.

I want to be presumptuous and request how the story might develop from here, I want so badly to tell you how to steer the story, but... It's your story, so instead I'll just say that I'd really like to see some genuine affection between Amelia and James, like their kiss in the previous chapter.

Posted by Jikarite 8 years ago Report

Hey, thanks for taking the time to leave such detailed and effective feedback. I take everything anyone says to heart, so don't think this sort of thing doesn't go into my consideration.

I definitely have a story outline, so I won't spoil it or make adjustments, but I don't think I'll have to. If you keep reading my further installments perhaps you'll be pleased.

Posted by zeek175 8 years ago Report

Man, these are so good I spent the last day refreshing eka's so often just to see if the new one had hit yet. That's some draw power.

Posted by Jikarite 8 years ago Report

Thank you for your enthusiasm. It means a lot. I promise you won't have to wait much longer for part 4.

Posted by mallowsal 8 years ago Report

would love the context around "getting their cocks"

Posted by zeek175 8 years ago Report

I think it would be poetic justice if James ended up being the special one and not them, like they only got the cocks because they were around him so much.
It would pretty neatly explain why it was his girlfriend and his highschool bully that were affected, and why he's been secretly enjoying this so much.
But then again, that might give him too much power. He's pretty nice in the victim role.

Posted by mallowsal 8 years ago Report

id actually love to see him become the true power. maybe multicocks?! or a cock with a maw?

Posted by darc22005 8 years ago Report

These three stories are great. Hope to see this series continue and or other stories from ya

Posted by VoreLover9012 8 years ago Report

In a way I feel bad for James, I hope Amelia becomes a little considerate to him being on the receiving end or something. Anywho would it be alright if I drew Amelia and her gigantic cock?

Posted by Jikarite 8 years ago Report

Feel free to do any drawing or other works using anything of mine, I'm currently working on getting the next chapter out right now since it is egregiously overdue.

I'd be delighted for anyone to draw anything from my stuff.

Posted by GingerSnaps 7 years ago Report

The transition from unwilling to willing prey is a beautiful thing uwu