Posted by Jikarite 8 years ago Report

I apologize to everyone waiting for the super long delay this had!

Posted by darc22005 8 years ago Report

My eyes widened greatly seeing this in my updates

Posted by Magaso 8 years ago Report

Somehow, he needs to get Amelia in his balls, to show her what it's like.

Posted by darc22005 8 years ago Report

Will James end up growing a hyper cock in the future?

Posted by futavorelover 8 years ago Report

love the story telling as always
but any futher commentary would just turn into a reiteration of my comment on the last story

Posted by Camlio420 8 years ago Report

Okay these two need to die... horribly... they're kidnapping people and nobody is calling them out on it? I mean everyone at the store likely saw Jill when she left with them... so it's impossible to say she just vanished.

Posted by futavorelover 8 years ago Report

sentiment kinda shared, it's just the theme of the story though that taboo notion of abuse border lining on torture, not everyone's cup of tea but the story telling is still good

Posted by Frazone 8 years ago Report

And the story gets even more abusive. There isn't even anything fun about this anymore. Just a couple of bastards that need to be thoroughly beaten till they are black and blue and red all over.

Posted by futavorelover 8 years ago Report

the only thing that really tipped it over (for me atleast) was dragging his sister into it

Posted by Frazone 8 years ago Report

It went sour well before that for me. Last chapter was when i went okay this needs to turn around but this chapter was just full on pure sick abuse right from the start that there wasn't anything pleasurable.

The story started with the two things I love most in vore CV with nonfatal entrapment. But has now changed into the two things I hate most in vore, Predators that turn on their friends/family and dumb ass arrogant predators that go about without a care in the world.

Posted by futavorelover 8 years ago Report

yeah that's true, to be fair it went bad after the 1st just cause the abuse don't know why but i can't stand that type of thing, but it's not through yet maybe it will turn around in the end and everything will work out

Posted by armageddondevil 8 years ago Report

agreed

Posted by Houyo 8 years ago Report

Wow, that ending where the sister got ate was pretty hot. XD Don't let the haters get to you.

Posted by Jikarite 8 years ago Report

I am very grateful for all forms of feedback, actually. I'm just glad they cared enough to comment.

Posted by futavorelover 8 years ago Report

thought of something, (late night ramblings again as that's just the time to think i guess) while i think it's been said why people dislike this story in ways (the extreme abuse/torture) it has progressed along with the story itself, as it started out it was just friends doing normal things and we have james(prey) perspective and not amelia's(predator) and then she changes and uses him for her pleasure despite him not wanting to and even telling her to stop and stuffs him in her and carries on with her life as he doesn't matter as long as she is getting pleasure even if he suffers kinda typical vore story setup but it steps further in each sequel, part 2 she lets him go and is surprised and confused at his angry at her for what she did as she doesn't know what it's like stuffed away and thinks "well it makes me cum alot so oh well" and then promises she won't stuff him back in if they date and then proceeds to do so anyway against his will and her word saying it just means he belongs to her as if he's just a toy to be used for pleasure not a person anymore, part 3 a month(i think) has passed with him sealed away and she doesn't care or think of anything but the amazing orgasms she gets from him and but wants to be fucked but wants him in still so she hooks up with someone that hated them and they hated to do so and when he gets out all she reacts in confusion as if she thought he liked it in there and tries to put him back but the bully saves him for a moment and she still treats him like a toy even going as far as to "share" him with the bully after once again saying he won't have to go back in, and finally part 4 even when she lets him out once more it comes with he restrictions of "you go in whenever i want" (which is always pretty much) unless she wants someone to game with and otherwise the bully can have him (which he obviously doesn't want) and won't even tell him how he can earn his freedom thinking that (from the way she looked at the key) it isn't even a possibility he wanted to be free and to focused on her own pleasure to see how her child hood friends feels anymore as he's just a toy now, and the final nail (so far) is dragging his sister into it by essentially kidnapping her so the bully can (i;m assuming anyway for the next story explanation on it) have his own toy which is worse than james as she wasn't aware of what was happening and even cried for help for her brother before going down and amelia whispers to him that she loves him when really she only loves the pleasure he brings being in her as a toy not a man

(sorry for long winded rant and such late night just gets me thinking to hard and long on things)

Posted by futavorelover 8 years ago Report

and as always no offense meant by anything just thoughts on the taboo theme of the story, which is told very well or else no one would care this much to dislike amelia and joseph for what their doing as that happens in a normal vore story but normally the prey is digested so you don't really think to long about their suffering or anything as they're gone but here they're trapped against their will by people who only see them as sex toys not other humans(or furries)

Posted by futavorelover 8 years ago Report

and another thing i just snapped to, when she said all he had to do was say a safeword and she'll let him out either she knew he wouldn't be able to talk due to being smothered by her balls which makes it worse and reflects on the rest of the rant as she just wants him as a toy and is just giving him fake peace offerings that amount to nothing like the be my boyfriend or when she let him out with joseph or if she didn't and was being serious then she's just a ditz that didn't realize that might happen

Posted by Jikarite 8 years ago Report

Wow! I am so grateful you took the time to leave such a detailed feedback. Like many others who are iffy on the current tone of the story, I am still extremely glad for any feedback as it always helps me as a writer. Thank you for putting your thoughts down so expansively.

Posted by futavorelover 8 years ago Report

no problem, feels better to let out how one feels than just mull it over to themselves something i normally i do but late hours just bring out the conversational side of me i guess

Posted by zeek175 8 years ago Report

Yay! Seeing this come out made my evening.

Seems like the cockpreds can't really control themselves anymore. I wonder what kind of twist could be coming up next.

Posted by Scion 8 years ago Report

This was pretty awesome, did not disappoint

The imagery and sub/Dom really just makes this series click

Although I thought this was quite tame compared to any NTR or any fatal vore though.

Posted by Scion 8 years ago Report

so I dont get the hate**

Posted by futavorelover 8 years ago Report

it's not really a sub/dom thing that would imply consent to which james nor his sister have given any and infact voice that they want out repeatedly (in james case not his sister yet) , they were forced to be used as toys
a sub/dom relationship wouldn't have people being mad as some coments show but even so not everything is to people's personal tastes

Posted by Randomness 8 years ago Report

Lucky for the prey involved, seems like theres no digestion in those 'bawls'. :P

Posted by Uryx 8 years ago Report

I really hope you continue this story, and maybe pick up another unfinished series while you're at it ;3

Posted by zeek175 8 years ago Report

Longest comment ever incoming.

Posted by zeek175 8 years ago Report

So many hot things. So many.

Amelia's absolute need for James, and her fear of losing him that constantly dances back and forth from emotional to sexual.
From seemingly genuine love and adoration for him to domineering, utterly one-sided cock domination and rape.
You can never really tell if she really loves him or not but it's obvious she never ever wants to let him away from her cock.
How she kept him leashed to it, and it slowly pulled him in bit by bit every time she became aroused turned me on so much I go nuts even thinking about it.
She may have said it half jokingly, but now her cock really owns him.
In fact, her cock domination all throughout the series has been completely top-notch and memorable. It's always been filled with the two elements that Cock Vore needs to really BE good. Dominance and LUST.
The pred has to WANT IT and bad. And boy does Amelia show us how she wants it.

From crushing down on James with her muscles in the last one when he tried to escape and DEMANDING that he get. back. IN. Showing that she's the one in control and there isn't really any escape.
To literally getting so horny that she fucked him all the way down her cock just with her thrusts in the second one. Humping like a madman as she pushed him each time deeper and deeper.
Or when she cornered him with it in the very first one. That scene is so damn memorable I remember most of the dialogue in my head. "Get in my cock." "...it'd be so funny. I'd have laughs for days." and she FORCES him in it.
Or the scene on the couch when she forces it down his throat over and over again, and even when he gets her to stop she never stops cumming all over him like he's just a sexual object. Which along with being super hot worked on a storytelling level because it shows she wasn't just horny, she was horny for HIM.
Or when he doesn't want to sit on the couch later because she's covered it in cum and she stops him from moving with her cockbulge, rubbing it all over his face in a gesture that's half romance half threat. Ooh I love when she threatens him with her cock too.
Speaking of storytelling, I feel like that second couch scene speaks volumes .
Him being disgusted and wanting to ick away from the cum couch is kind of a rejection of both Amelia and the overly sexual nature his situation has taken on. And her response is both a reminder that he has no choice, and a sign of the real love that she has for him. It's fantastic.
And I love the moments when the cock domination ISN'T so lovey dovey too.
The ones that keep us questioning if she really loves him or not.
Like keeping him inside her balls for three weeks, leaving him so zoned out he wasn't even sure if he was alive or dead anymore. Or saying in this one "Well I'll guess I'll let you out because I need someone to play video games with." No concern for if he's okay, or what he wants, or his human rights, only because that's what she wants now.
Just completely taking over his life WITH HER COCK.
I mean think about it.
He was gone for 3 days, then 3 weeks. That's about a month. Without any word.
Gone that long from any lifestyle, and you won't have anything anymore.
Jobs will have fired you, schools will assume you've dropped out,
friends and family probably think you're dead. You might even be on the missing person's list.
Hell, he wouldn't have seen the light of day at all if it wasn't for one moment's compassion, not from her, but from the guy she decided to fuck because James can't have sex while he's serving her cock. And that will never happen again because now Joseph is addicted too. James is fucked.
And the scenes in the balls. I love how on the one hand it seems kind of comforting and womblike and you could just drift off to sleep, but on the other it seems pretty entrapping and nonconsensual, body totally constricted and immobile. No sight, no real sounds unless she wants there to be(More domination yeah!), and your every breath, your every meal, is her cum. The symbol of her sexuality towards James, of his situation.
The cum symbolism continued fantastically in this one too. He didn't get to eat real food like they did. He practically begged them for food and she just opened his mouth and forcefed him more cum.
Just to reinforce to him that he lives only for her cock. That her cum is what he gets,
what he belongs with, how he should be. It's so damn hot, but so heartless!
Honestly, this has become my absolute favorite Cock Vore series of all time at this point.
I love the good parts and the bad parts, because they hit different sweet spots depending on what mood I'm in when I come read it. I didn't even have to look back over the stories to do this whole write-up.
And the whole time, you've rode the line so expertly that no one can tell if she really loves him, or if she doesn't care about him at all, no one can tell if this is going to have a happy ending or not, if James will escape or stand up for himself, or if he'll break completely and submit himself to living for her cock. 10(I gotta go fap right now I can't stand it anymore) out of 10.

Posted by Jikarite 8 years ago Report

When I opened Eka's on my mobile to do my daily check I came to the new comments and saw this, thinking it was my story body by the sheer size of it. Holy crap.

First off, not entirely sure where to begin. Thank you for taking so much time and effort to write up your thoughts on my story. This sort of feedback is literally worth more than a commission. Hell, this is the sort of feedback I would pay for. If just because of how much effort you put into writing down your thoughts, citing examples and your reactions. I'm still really blown away. Legitimately humbled that you think so highly of my little series. It has more than made my day, as any feedback I receive does.

I hope that when I write new additions to Hyper Roomie that they continue to meet your expectations and are similarly worth your time, same for everyone else. When I inevitably wrap this story up I hope that my future projects are also just as interesting, even if the nature of experimentation means I'll certainly have more flops.

Damn, the surprise of seeing such a massive feedback comment keeps hitting me like an echo. Seriously thank you, and while I love knowing what I did wrong so I can learn how to fix it, it's also good to know what I'm doing right for some.

It just sets my soul on fire to know what I'm writing is being read and thought about. Keep an eye on the gallery, the next update is not far away.

Posted by zeek175 8 years ago Report

:D

Posted by zeek175 8 years ago Report

Man, I'm just sitting here re-reading these like http://i.imgur.com/f3CmzJJ.gif

Posted by futavorelover 8 years ago Report

this this right here, sums it all up perfectly

Posted by Uryx 8 years ago Report

It's been a while, but I REALLY hope you continue this soon, or do something completely different, I'm not picky, I just love your writing!

Posted by Frazone 8 years ago Report

So here I am. Five months later (feels like so much longer) and I finally have the courage to reread this series. Thought Skipped large parts of three and especially four.

Hyper Roomie is without a doubt the most powerful vore story I have ever read. Testament by the fact it still regularly enters my thoughts even this longer after. Reading HR is extremely visceral. The dark possessiveness and disregard for James’s opinion put a heavy weight in my gut, a tightness in my chest and send shivers down my spine, and the way it grips me causes these feelings to last for hours. Which isn’t really a good thing. I don’t know if other people feel the same things reading this or if they like it, but for me has it drags on and on the feeling becomes more and more unpleasant. This could just be the way I am and that although not a lot of things stick to me when they do, they stick hard. I have a rule to never read tragedy. The one time I did it ruined my mood for days and keep cropping up weeks later to do it again.

Has a predator the first three chapters appeal to me in a very basic way I may not always be happy about. It also makes me dislike the predator while rooting for the prey. And why am I doing this I’m a predator and isn’t taking the lives of others for my own sexual satisfaction what I do has well? Why do I even care about James? I think HR is heavily responsible for changing my view on vore. Ironically away from the content of this story into more willing territory. I also point to an unusual BDSM comic (i think it was BDSM) that I happened to stumble across. Anyway after somewhat violent sex that was basically rape and heavily demining the two ended cuddling together. What I remember most where the commenters talking about real world BDSM practises and how this recovery step was super important. It made me think that if vore was a real thing that could be done it would be the same way. How this underlying love and trust is established and reinforced is something I now think heavily on. Anyway very little of that was related to this story so I will move on.

The monster that is chapter four. Although I disliked Amelia and chapters one through three had me steadily growing displeased with the situation my discontent was not enough for me to voice them until chapter four. Chapter four completely changes what has been happening in the story up till that point. On the surface it might seem the same, but vore is barely a part of this chapter. The open is more focused on what is happening outside, Jill is consumed with little detail, and James’s return to the balls is little more than a paragraph long. It switches from primal desire to more calculated humiliation, dehumanisation and just plain cruelty, and spends most of the chapter hammering these points home. Denied actual food because that would mean Amelia has less, and he’s not worthy of such things! I best move on else this just become a rant. In single chapter Amelia became irredeemable. In a single chapter Amelia went from a brat I disliked to a monster I will not be happy unless ends up dead, or functionally dead, like say trapped in a certain person's balls for the rest of her life never to see the light of day again. That is why I hate chapter four. The first three are ones I enjoy even if they are unsettling. And will be able to enjoy so much more if the series gets a “happy” ending

I do accept that giving criticism about a fetish peice is basically impossible. There is no way to objectively measure the content of such a thing, even less than in regular media, has weather a person finds such a peice enjoyable is so heavily dependent on their nuanced fetish. If you enjoy chapter four please don’t take this has a personal attack. Or waste our time arguing over what is the “right” way for the story to go. The only purpose of this comment is to express my feeling towards this series.

Posted by lykeslycks 7 years ago Report

I can't tell you how many times I've come back to read this story over and over XD

Posted by HatePlow 7 years ago Report

Still hoping this series will continue!

Posted by TheNamesJackson 7 years ago Report

I want him to get out of this hell so badly that it’s actually making me mad at you. I mean, call the police! Run away! Do something other then than tough it out!