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This story is set in the Felarya-linked version of Hell, created by Karbo. The realms of Hell which are mentioned or seen are Karbo's creations.
The basic story, and many of the events which take place during the infernal reception depicted within, were all suggested by Krisexy (though I've adapted them to some extent, and added my own ideas of course). Merci, ma chère, pour l'inspiration que tu m'as donnée !
The characters of Meralimexia, Chalyssea, Ashmet and Menyssan all belong to Karbo. "Nylliste" is the non-canon name I've given to Menyssan's dark-haired sister, who is Karbo's (unnamed) creation, first seen ten years ago in his picture "Succubi at work". The character of Zycra, who appears briefly, belongs to Vaderaz. All other characters are my own (or belong to the characters who eat them).
This story contains a lot of vore, and occasionally explicit sexual references.
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Posted by Amadaus 8 years ago Report
Love the story! Although there is one thing - kinda nitpicking, but here it is.
"Neither of them had wings, nor a tail, although they were clearly succubi. Cgeyel recognised them both, through the amiable dealings that her mistress had had with House Malachos. The elder woman, Lady Meralimexia, looked up, noticed them, and acknowledged Lady Llehli with a small inclination of her graceful head. Llehli responded in kind."
They don't have wings, but both Chalyessa and her mom did indeed have tails like other succubus - I even remember Chalyss massaging her crotch with her tail in both the comics she was in.
Other then that though, love the story :)
Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report
Thanks! And yes, you're right about them having a tail. I've fixed it.