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Tags: Anthro Anthro Prey Bird Bird Pred boots cloaca Cruel Cruel Pred Digestion Disposal Eagle Eagle Pred Eagle Vore F/M Fart Farting Fatal Feet Female Pred Feral Pred Foot Fetish Foot Play Foot worship Fowl Furry Gas Gassy Humiliation latex Macro/Micro Oral Vore pellet Pellet Regurgitation Post Vore Scat Post-Vore Scat Sergal sergal prey Shrinking Shrunken Soft Vore Sweat Talons torture Unwilling
Within every regime their will be someone looking to overthrow it. Some rulers would send military to deal with rebels, but this one delights in dealing with them personally.
This story is mostly focused around humiliation, foot (claw?) worship and digestion leading into disposal.
This is a commission written for a feral eagle.
The proof reader for this story was dudey64, many thanks to them.
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Posted by thirdspurs 8 years ago Report
Oooh pellets! There is not nearly enough of this stuff. Thanks much!
Posted by Septia 8 years ago Report
Glad to hear someone enjoyed that~
I agree that there is not enough of it, it's quite fun.
Posted by Cryos 8 years ago Report
Great story, as always :3
Posted by Septia 8 years ago Report
Always happy to hear~
Posted by presentfactory 8 years ago Report
Cloacas and disposal are quite a rare sight as well, nice to see that
Posted by Septia 8 years ago Report
Cloacas are rather rare in themselves in vore.
Posted by Speedyblupi 8 years ago Report
This is mostly good, but there are some missing apostrophes and a few places where the words seem to have been written in the wrong order, like "Volk screamed in pain while his body was shaved off his light gray coat. Beneath was his flesh exposed."
As you get to the disposal part, grammar seems to get worse, and a lot of words are wrong (e.g. "condensing" for what I think is supposed to be "condescending" , "not but" should be "naught but". You should use "cloaca", not "cloacae", because it's singular.
Posted by Septia 8 years ago Report
With exception of the apostrophes, I have corrected what you brought up. Thank you for brining this to my attention~
Posted by Jrew 7 years ago Report
>"very minor torture"
>He gets his arm broken under her boot
yeah okay dude
Posted by Septia 7 years ago Report
That was indeed a screw-up on my end.
Unsure what made me think that constituted as "minor" torture (the "very" was just superfluous altogether).
Maybe because it was short? I might have meant to write "brief" torture. Whatever the case, I have corrected it now.
Thank you for bringing this to my attention.
Posted by Jrew 7 years ago Report
Ah well thanks for the fix!
Posted by Septia 7 years ago Report
You are welcome, thanks again for letting me know~.