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In the Eagle's Grasp [Disposal] By Septia -- Report

Within every regime their will be someone looking to overthrow it. Some rulers would send military to deal with rebels, but this one delights in dealing with them personally.

This story is mostly focused around humiliation, foot (claw?) worship and digestion leading into disposal.

This is a commission written for a feral eagle.

The proof reader for this story was  dudey64, many thanks to them.

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thirdspurs

Posted by thirdspurs 6 years ago Report

Oooh pellets! There is not nearly enough of this stuff. Thanks much!

Septia

Posted by Septia 6 years ago Report

Glad to hear someone enjoyed that~
I agree that there is not enough of it, it's quite fun.

Cryos

Posted by Cryos 6 years ago Report

Great story, as always :3

Septia

Posted by Septia 6 years ago Report

Always happy to hear~

presentfactory

Posted by presentfactory 6 years ago Report

Cloacas and disposal are quite a rare sight as well, nice to see that

Septia

Posted by Septia 6 years ago Report

Cloacas are rather rare in themselves in vore.

Speedyblupi

Posted by Speedyblupi 5 years ago Report

This is mostly good, but there are some missing apostrophes and a few places where the words seem to have been written in the wrong order, like "Volk screamed in pain while his body was shaved off his light gray coat. Beneath was his flesh exposed."

As you get to the disposal part, grammar seems to get worse, and a lot of words are wrong (e.g. "condensing" for what I think is supposed to be "condescending" , "not but" should be "naught but". You should use "cloaca", not "cloacae", because it's singular.

Septia

Posted by Septia 5 years ago Report

With exception of the apostrophes, I have corrected what you brought up. Thank you for brining this to my attention~

Jrew

Posted by Jrew 4 years ago Report

>"very minor torture"
>He gets his arm broken under her boot

yeah okay dude

Septia

Posted by Septia 4 years ago Report

That was indeed a screw-up on my end.
Unsure what made me think that constituted as "minor" torture (the "very" was just superfluous altogether).
Maybe because it was short? I might have meant to write "brief" torture. Whatever the case, I have corrected it now.
Thank you for bringing this to my attention.

Jrew

Posted by Jrew 4 years ago Report

Ah well thanks for the fix!

Septia

Posted by Septia 4 years ago Report

You are welcome, thanks again for letting me know~.