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And that's the end of this chapter! I have no doubt in my mind that this is probably my most popular series thus far, so thank you everybody for participating and making this a (mostly) fun ride! It was a unique experience and I hope to make the next chapter even better with what I learned in this series.
Speaking of that, I have at least a few series I want to do before I get back to this, so please be patient until the next part starts!
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Posted by Kasra 8 years ago Report
Ahh, cliffhangers! The most cruel thing you can do before asking for patience!!
You've been running a fantastic game, here. I think I speak for a lot of us around here when I say, thank you for all of the effort that you have clearly put into it.
Posted by Gutsman25 8 years ago Report
Based on what we are seeing, I think that this entire thing (the dissapearances and kidnapping) were a large set-up to get to killing Java. But, what shocks me more is Jabaro. He is helping them. Which means one of two things; he was the original kidnapper of the child or he did not know. I hope Kuva would be willing to help if the latter proves true.
Thank you Fidchell, for this pleasant scenario. I hope that you will continue this saga of Tanya in the future. It has been rather enjoyable having a creative input in the story.
Posted by Gutsman25 8 years ago Report
I meant former.
Posted by Zego21 8 years ago Report
cliff hanger, how profound. looks like jabaro is in on the hunt too
Posted by Sergit 8 years ago Report
I will wait patiently. Great job on this first chapter! :3
Posted by Hoodoo 8 years ago Report
Ooh, that's a sexy rat. Hope he eats the girls up!
Posted by deathknight 8 years ago Report
That dog...its like a british army officer in a way. Something tells me this is not just a simple assassination in so much as it is to remove any and all rivals.
Posted by G0DF1RE 8 years ago Report
yeah....are we bringing the Brits and African Colonization into this.....>ARE WE BRINGING THE GERMANS INTO THIS TOO ???????? ARE WE GONNA HAVE A GERMAN SHEPARD ROMMEL IN THIS OMG SOOO MANY UN ANSWERED COLONIZATION AND POSSIBLE WW1 AND WW2 REFERANCES AHAHAHAHAHAHA I"M SOOOO FUCKING GIDDY I CAN"T STAND IT !!!!
Posted by slyfoxxl 8 years ago Report
I would say Boer War era, more than WWI or WWII
Posted by G0DF1RE 8 years ago Report
i know....i'm just soooooo gosh darn Excited !!!!!
Posted by G0DF1RE 8 years ago Report
good call on Boer War by the way i'm a history buff, but boer war didn't click as much as the boxer Rebellion but that's in china ! he he,
Posted by Aikahime 8 years ago Report
Only you can prevent forest fires
Posted by chimcharinsanity 8 years ago Report
more of a nitpick than anything, but I wish you would have had two pages of the 3 talking for filler and the ended part one on a nice solid page 50 xD
Seriously, though, this is an insanely good comic, one of the best! Can't wait for a continuation! :D
Posted by Olive 8 years ago Report
Did... we forget the poison dart?
Posted by zbuilders 8 years ago Report
No, it was in our inventory last time.
Posted by F1reDem0n 8 years ago Report
Seeing the Dog carrying the injured cub, his face reminds me of Smokey the Bear. Like his expression says:
This fire could have been avoided, because only YOU can prevent forest fires!"
Lol
Posted by G0DF1RE 8 years ago Report
IT"S THE BEST DAMN STORY LINE SINCE MY FAVORITE ANIME OF ALL TIME DRAGON BALL Z here's my favorite but not the first opening ! of DBZ :3 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8E-nsSwekgE (( hope you don't mind ! Fidchell you are On Par With Akira Toriyama !!!!!
Posted by Wolfknight130 8 years ago Report
kill zem with fire!
Posted by zbuilders 8 years ago Report
Oh shit, Jabaro has our big sword
Posted by 9kirby99 8 years ago Report
Aaaaah! We managed to ally ourselves appropriately! Awesome!
Posted by JiklokEmisaryOfSteel 8 years ago Report
(Seeing all of these events transpire before me. My white eyes tear up but then I begin to snarl.) Enough power of suggestion! I am ready to directly intervine! (Forcing body into the material world instead of just throwing my spirit out. Only... the world itself began to fade to black) No... NO! I can't just leave it like this! (Attempting to refocus but some unknown force is pulling me away from this story for now) Danmit... danmit all... (Was back in the spiritual plane with many other dimensions to choose from once again) sigh... I will be back... for now I suppose I'll just have to be patient. (Floats around looking for other stories to help along with stern and sometimes obnoxious aid)
Twas good comrade eagerly awaiting whatever else you throw out into the cosmos. Have a good rest recharging your mind of good ideas.
Posted by JiklokEmisaryOfSteel 8 years ago Report
As for predictions, Maybe it was possible Java did have litle Kibwe at her home. Not as a hostage but as someone showing a general concern for the youngling. He perhaps had gotten lost one day and Java had happened to come by?
As for the band of explorer types, they may not be as it seems. They could easily be slavers who tracked down and stole Kibwe. They could also be just happening to traveling by and seen a jungle fire on the plains. Fire brings attention and they could have investigated. Saving little Kibwe in the process. Neither option is clear as of yet.
As for Jabaro and the rodent I am not sure what to think just yet. He may not know the rodent at all and is just following him like Tanya is for Java. One thing for certain is Jabaro is trying to kill Java. I hope it is only because he thinks she had something to do with the children or that he somehow summoned a good amount of courage in the past half a day. He could still be in cohoots with the rodent but... I honestly hope he is not.
That is all for now... well actually... It cannot go unsaid... call it my fatigue making my words flow out freely. Seeing Java in her full majestic form I had quite an urge to breed her. She is quite a sizable and interesting, complex lass.
Posted by DarkPinkie 8 years ago Report
Jabaro you beiatch! You are going straight to the tum tum!
Posted by G0DF1RE 8 years ago Report
Tanya Reminds me of a Humanoid Sized Predator Style (( classic of course )) Version of Judy Hopps Minus the Super Duper Up Beat ness :3
Posted by MonsterGirlLover194 8 years ago Report
When will you upload chapter 2?
Posted by FidchellVore 8 years ago Report
I am going to report you if you spam me with these comments again.
Posted by MonsterGirlLover194 8 years ago Report
Ok.
Sorry, it won't happen again.
Posted by Whitefiretyger 8 years ago Report
This is really good. I can't wait to see what you do for Chapter 2.
Keep up the great work.
Posted by Novapyro 7 years ago Report
This comic was awesome and sexy; A killer combination. I cant wait for part 2 and to see more of your work.
Posted by Sharktooth 7 years ago Report
So how long do you think?
Posted by Xarcht 7 years ago Report
Is there going to be more?
Posted by mrcool 7 years ago Report
More please
Posted by Shenzao 7 years ago Report
Oh wow, has it already been a year? This was a remarkable series. I still look forward to what is to come.
Out of curiosity, do you mind expanding on what it is that you learned during this series?
Posted by Ezio45 7 years ago Report
i really loved this so far an hope to see more