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Lana finds herself a worthy quarry and catches...maybe something else?
A quick silly idea I did in just a night, I really liked the idea behind this one so I just went ham on it! Hope you enjoy!
Special thanks to Renael for proofreading this in the wee hours of the night, I appreciate it!
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Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
Exciting exposition? Check. Detailed imagery? Check. Vore, digestion, and disposal? Check. I said it already, but I absolutely love the weight gain aspects of this one, told super well.
"Her meal also bumped the girl up a cup size, bringing her to a modest B in the breast department" = yes
Posted by HipAttack 7 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it, means a lot from you, Hal!
Posted by Cryos 7 years ago Report
Great work, as usual~ love the dialogue for this one!
Posted by DarkPinkie 7 years ago Report
You mean monologue. xD
Also the only thing I feel I would have liked differently would have been Lana actually inspecting her stinky duce and noticing the remains.
Posted by HipAttack 7 years ago Report
Alas, she'll never know thw true nature of her big, tasty breakfast
Posted by Cryos 7 years ago Report
Whatever mang, words are hard when youve been up all night~
Posted by Siorche 7 years ago Report
I've only been proofreading for a little while now and I was surprised to find like, no spelling mistakes whatsoever, haha. I do it in google docs, too so if there's anything I miss it usually picks up on it.
It was guud tho, ye. Lana butts.
Posted by HipAttack 7 years ago Report
Thanks again for helping, and once more for the kind words! Glad ye liked da butts
Posted by TrainerKatrine 6 years ago Report
There is grabbable thighs, I think it should be grabable thighs. But please do correct me if I'm wrong.
Posted by noisekeeper 7 years ago Report
Very awesome short story! Combines two of my favorite scenarios, an unaware pred, and the all too rare fishing angle where a person instantly swallows their high flying catch.
Posted by HipAttack 7 years ago Report
A scenario that isnt done nearly enough, imo. Glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by Cobbly 7 years ago Report
wait, what was the wishcash?
Posted by HipAttack 7 years ago Report
Simply a nameless, very unfortunate swimmer
Posted by twlightking 7 years ago Report
all i wanna know is who she ate.
Posted by HipAttack 7 years ago Report
Bit hard to tell when there's so much brown and norhing else to work from though