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After getting her first taste of shlicking, Lottie's hungry for more, so Peach decides to get her started on what might be an exciting new career.
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By popular demand, a fresh entry in End of the Line (https://aryion.com/g4/view/311416). It also features a crossover to another story of mine. Anyone recognize it? (It ain't subtle.)
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Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 7 years ago Report
Ohhh my this is certainly an interesting development.
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Quite so.
Posted by Goblingobler 7 years ago Report
I reeaaally enjoyed this one, especially her original prey constantly trying to escape in a public setting. >:3 Though I'm annoyed I can't pin point the cross-over! Pretty sure I've read almost all your work.
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
"Sexy Excess EXpress" was previously featured in the similarly name story here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/305958 That one was a trade, and had a much darker tone.
Posted by Goblingobler 7 years ago Report
Ahhh I see. :3
Posted by Groblek 7 years ago Report
Ooh, that's a fun one, thanks for revisiting this! And I do indeed recognize the crossover - I should, since the original of that one prompted me to write a fanfic piece. :) Introducing Madame Divine makes for all sorts of interesting possibilities. And it looks like Lottie's going to end up as a fetish star, with some help from Peach. I'm definitely looking forward to the filming sequence for that. :)
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Indeed. Getting Fan Fiction from you remains one of my number one achievements as a writer on this site. Meanwhile, I suspect if I write for long enough, I'll eventually cross over all of my stories in some way.
Posted by Adseria 7 years ago Report
I think I caught the reference, but I don't want to say what I think it is until I know the story I'm thinking of is actually yours. Unfortunately, I can't remember the title of the story.
Of course, it could just be that the compression we see in this story is caused by a HDTF, but somehow, that doesn't seem quite right. After all, if it was a HDTF, Dolly would have squeezed right through the hole with no trouble. No, I'm sticking with my original idea. I'll send if I can find the story and get back to you.
Posted by Adseria 7 years ago Report
So, I've had a quick look through your stories, but I couldn't find the one I was thinking of. The thing is, I'm not actually sure if this story actually is yours, so I'm going to have to go and look through the stories of everyone on this site whose stories I like. That could take a while. Get comfortable! :)
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
I'll save you the trouble. The reverence is to "Sexy Excess EXpress" https://aryion.com/g4/view/305958
Posted by Adseria 7 years ago Report
Yup. Just as I thought. I was completely wrong.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 7 years ago Report
I am so envious of this woman now. I do find the casual captivity of her prey to be a bit... well, questionable. But also sexy as hell. And the fact that she seems to be under no obligation to release them! What fun!
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Within the setting, the captivity is punishment for shoplifting or other store-based impropriety. So it's totally on the up and up. Probably the FTC specifically says displaying shoplifters nude in a tube and using them as sex toys until whenever is acceptable.
Posted by Goblingobler 6 years ago Report
Still a fun story. <3 Love Lottie and Peach.
Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report
They're a bad influence on each other in the best way.
Posted by Goblingobler 6 years ago Report
Hallelujah